Writer's Guild - "Revenge"

Hey all, My second story I'm tossing in the ring, This one's actually finished :) It's a story I wrote a while ago, some of you may have seen it, but I'm allways looking for ways to improve :)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/26136960/

It's basicaly the story of a girl who gets revenge on another and her group of friends in a very inflation way. Hope you enjoy! And as always, any level of critque is more than welcome. Thanks!

Dragon6860