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Mon, 04/19/2010 - 20:35

jmoney003

I have posted 5 new inflation stories on deviantART. I have submitted them on this website as well and they shall show up whenever the site manager desides to put them on. Click the links to read the stories. Please Comment on them on this forum or on deviantART itself. Hope you like them.

http://jmonney003.deviantart.com/journal/31680932/

http://jmonney003.deviantart.com/journal/31680962/

http://jmonney003.deviantart.com/journal/31680997/

http://jmonney003.deviantart.com/journal/31681035/

http://jmonney003.deviantart.com/journal/31681059/

Mon, 04/19/2010 - 21:15

Anonymous

I'll look past your shameless self-promotion if you post them in the writer's den next time.

Tue, 04/20/2010 - 03:53

airtankgirl5

Learn to post deviations rather than just long journal entries. It will make them MUCH easier to read.

Tue, 04/20/2010 - 05:09

Inflate123

I'd agree with that suggestion -- post these as individual deviations rather than journal entries, and format it so there are paragraph breaks etc. That will make them much easier to read, and to have other people find them in searches on DA, which will lead to more feedback and more exposure.

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Wed, 04/21/2010 - 01:25

jmoney003

I don't know how to post them as individual deviantations. And I wasn't self promoting myself, I was just posting the forum jeez. Thanks for commenting on the actual stories rather then pointing out pointless minor details, thanks your a real help. [ NOT =( ]

Wed, 04/21/2010 - 03:46

dragon_6860

Just hit the "Submit Deivation" button, it's pretty self-working. It'll bring up the options of what kinda thing you want to submit, and there it goes :) No worries.

No, I would not want to live in a world without dragons, as I would not want to live in a world without magic, for that is a world without mystery, and that is a world without faith.

Wed, 04/21/2010 - 07:36

Inflate123

I said it as nicely and as constructively as I could think of to say it. If you are posting your work publicly, you should get used to receiving feedback on ALL aspects of your work. If your feelings are hurt by people pointing out flaws, then maybe you should wait a little while before posting, and perhaps you will be more ready for feedback.

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Wed, 04/21/2010 - 10:20

jmoney003

Yes, but I wanted to see what people thought about the actually stories. Not about posting them and paragraph thing.

Wed, 04/21/2010 - 14:02

hfilled

jmoney003 wrote:

Yes, but I wanted to see what people thought about the actually stories. Not about posting them and paragraph thing.

It's easier to read the story with proper paragaph breaks and the like. I mean, they could be the best stuff ever written, but I'd feel the urge to copy the stuff and edit it to my satisfaction so that I could actually read it and enjoy. Note that I've posted several stories here inproper story form and the powers that be still found the need to space things out a bit (maybe it's just the way I wrote them).

Wed, 04/21/2010 - 18:44

#10

jmoney003

I understand where your coming from and I'm taking these comments for future stories and will from now on take your advice because I know most of you are just trying to help.. But before I can even write more stories I need to know if I Still Should Write Stories by getting feedback about the stories themselves, that's all I'm saying.

Sat, 04/24/2010 - 22:30

#11

Inflate123

Regardless of feedback, you should keep writing stories. Don't look to the community for permission or approval; use the feedback to grow, but writers...they write.

If me telling you "good job!" is the impetus for you writing more, and if you don't get it you won't...I'm not interested in that kind of relationship. It suggests you are looking for attention, not advice.

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Mon, 04/26/2010 - 00:05

#12

darth_clone19

For you to know whether you have the talent to keep writing, dont you think people should be able to read them first?

By the way, if you post them as journals, nobody is EVER going to find them using the search engine.

- Read my stories: darth-clone19.deviantart.com

Mon, 04/26/2010 - 04:50

#13

Dsmitz

Ok, so just feed back on the stories. They are good however I felt as if the actual inflation process was more or less the same for each one. The order of inflation, the process of clothes tearing, those sorts of things all felt far to similar. My suggestion: try to diversify.

I'm a revolutionary of sorts.

Mon, 04/26/2010 - 10:37

#14

jmoney003

Dsmitz wrote:

Ok, so just feed back on the stories. They are good however I felt as if the actual inflation process was more or less the same for each one. The order of inflation, the process of clothes tearing, those sorts of things all felt far to similar. My suggestion try to diversify.

Ok I will try to diversify my stories in the future. Now I that you mention it I see what you mean. Thank You being honest.

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