Julia's Revenge- Part 1

Inflation Types:
Popping:
Date Written: 
11/12/2012

Julia was always the outcast throughout her life, because of the fact she grew up in a poor orphanage, and the fact she was overweight. BUt in high school, she was bullied the most.

"Hey fatso!" Fran, Julia's worst enemy called out to her. "When are you gonna take that whale out from under your shirt?" She smiled evily, and cackled as her wannabe friends laughed stupidly.

Just keep walking, Julia, they won't come after you. Julia told herself as she rushed down the half-empty corridor. Most of the kids were flooding into the classrooms. By the time Julia reached the classroom, Fran had grbbed herby her shirt collar.

"Oh no you don't," Fran said. She threw Julia against the lockers and stared her directly in the eyes. "You're not going to class, chubby."

"W-why?" Julia squeaked. Fran slapped her.

"Don't ask why! You're coming with us." The wannabes grabbed Julia's arms and led her to the locker room. Inside of Julia's mind, she felt her anger spark. Her powers had been ignited. The wannabes and Fran pinned her against the wall of the locker room. Julia clenched her teeth and shouted for help as loud as she could.

"It's no use, Julia," Fran said, "No one can hear you!" She laughed. Julia's eyes flared. In her mind, she focused on Fran. 

"Wh- What the?" Fran gasped as she felt her thighs expanding out. Her slutty little miniskirt flew off, and hit the ground with a smack! She grabbed her breasts as they grew out, her tight tanktop splitting at the seams. She groaned loudly. 

"What the hell is happening to me?" She shouted. She then looked at Julia. "It's your fault!" She shouted at her. Julia smiled the same way Fran did, and nodded evily. Fran's stomach then busted out, throwing her back a little. By the time she looked like a human balloon, she was pleading to Julia.

"Julia, please, make it stop! I'll do anything! I promise!"

"Why should I?" Julia said. "You're the one who's been making fun of me, you dirt-sucking whore."

Fran let out another moan right before she exploded with a deep BOOM. Julia glared at the wannabes, and they fled.

"Ah," Julia said to no one. "Revenge is nice."

Author's Note: 

PLZ wait for Part 2.

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Why it got only one star...

Wayyyy too short.  No build up, no nothing.  Basically a bullied gal is grabbed by a bully, but turns tables superfast by magically inflating and popping her.  Yawn.  Sorry.  Tried to like it, and it has lots of room (pun) for potential, but it needed to be a good page and a half long or so to get a better rating from me.