As someone that has similar attitudes about both realism and character development, I applaud your efforts. I look forward to what you come up with. When you get serious about these concepts, stories tend to take on a life of their own, and thereby tend to become lengthy. Been there, done that.
Started writing my first inflation story.
I’ve made a start writing my first inflation story.
Truth is, I’ve never actually written a story like this before. There are a couple of other forums that I like to go to (using different I.Ds, of course), and they’re about a particular TV show, film franchise and a series of books that I like.
The thing is, in the past I have written some short fan fiction for these forums involving their particular topic (up to 6 in total, across all the forums), but I’ve never actually written one about this particular fetish before.
And although I have just started putting some details down, I’ve already laid out (in my mind) the basic narrative, location and characters.
But my main concern is not the characters or the dialogue, it’s actually the rendering of the story-to try and create an inflation scenario that has a certain plausibility about it (and by that I mean how the inflation would actually be rendered in a visual way from the characters perspective, the characters emotions/reaction, etc).
I’ll keep everyone updated over the next few days.
Fri, 06/21/2013 - 14:48
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Tue, 06/25/2013 - 11:40
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I've finished writing my first story, and I'm quite pleased with the results. :-)
It's actually ended up quite a bit longer then I thought, and is now about 4900 words! :-0
I feel that it's so long now that I've decided to break it down into two parts, which I'll post now.
I’m about 70% of the way through now, and I must say I’m quite happy wit it so far.
I’ve come up with a title (which I will simply call First Timer, for reason that will become apparent when you read the story), and have written about 3075 words so far, covering about 14 pages of A4 (WAY more then I had expected! :-0 ).
There are two things that I’m hoping to try and achieve here. The first is that I’m actually trying to create an actual sense of REALISM about the story-I’m thinking very hard about what it would really LOOK (and even SOUND to an extent) if it was actually happening in real life, so I’m thinking very carefully about the DETAIL about the scene itself.
Also, I want to try and add a bit of emphasis to the characters themselves-to try and think about what they are thinking and feeling when it happens, the emotional side too.
I especially wanted to focus on the characters reaction to the situation, to make it feel more genuine.
My next post, I hope, will be when I’m finished it. :-)