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Submitted by Deep_Breath_In on Fri, 06/21/2013 - 23:17
These are a couple of rough ideas I've had for stories recently. Leave a comment to tell me which one would make the best story. 
 
Amy's Balloon Journey
 
8 year old Amy had had enough of being stuck on the ground like a stone. She wanted to be just like her toy balloon, floating, practically weightless in the sky. And she was going to do just that. She held onto her balloon tightly, took a deep breath, and her torso swelled, just like a balloon. She expanded until she was a perfect sphere. And she then slowly rose up off the ground, weightless like her balloon, and into the sky. 
 
What a Peach! 
 
"I have something to show you, Mario" said Peach seductively. Mario just stood there, bewildered. Peach had something for him? Slowly, the princess inhaled a deep breath and placed her gloved hands underneath her breast. Mario then had to pinch himself as he saw that the princess' chest was actually starting to grow. Peach held her breath, and her breasts grew bigger and rounder and bulkier. 
 
Sat, 06/22/2013 - 11:15
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doubleintegral
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Inflating 8-year-olds is no bueno, ese.

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Sat, 06/22/2013 - 12:31
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throwaway261

Agreeing with DI.  This is a fetish.  There is a sexual component to it for most of us.  Sex and people under the age of 16 to 18 (depending on your national and municipal laws) just do not mix, and is more than a little creepy.

Not a fan of the second, either.  Fan fiction and inflation, not my thing.

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Sat, 06/22/2013 - 19:37
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doubleintegral
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This is a fetish.  There is a sexual component to it for most of us.  Sex and people under the age of 16 to 18 (depending on your national and municipal laws) just do not mix, and is more than a little creepy.

Pretty much the only valid exception to this rule is Violet Beauregarde, and that is only because she is the "aha" moment for a lot of our own inflation fetishes.

There is no good reason to inflate an 8-year-old in a fetish context, and no good reason why that 8-year-old couldn't be an 18-year-old.

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Sun, 11/03/2013 - 12:17
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Deep_Breath_In

Hi doubleintegral. The text was supposed to say that the individual in question is 18 years of age, but the missing 1 is simply a typo. I do not mean to have caused a commotion like this. 

If you're turned on by the idea of a girl turning herself into a balloon by taking a really deep breath, this is the guy to talk to.

Take a deep breath in. You'll need it.

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