Right... that does help :) Sadly, I can't post something to my profile or anything, how bout I send it to ya in a message? Or, to whomever wishes to assist. Can't attach things on here, can I email it?
First-time writer needing help please?
Hi there folks! New writer here looking for some help.
I have twenty pages of a story written somewhat decently based off a dream I had years ago that kick-started this whole fetish for me. Problem is, I have writers block and keep re-writing bits of it and cannot decide on a few points of plot...
Basic plotline: There exists a secret group of conveiently Bi-sexual girls who can all inflate, who run an Inflatable Play-Place, where they live and work and balloon themselves. It's not the best written thing, but what I have right now is that a new girl finds them who has dreamed of being a balloon all her life. Our protaganist is then shown the ropes on inflating, from the very beginning with a tire-pump, all the way to room-filling ball, with some added stuff thrown in. There are only five characters really, so it wasn't meant to be a massive story but it just kept rolling on haha. My biggest issue is that I cannot decide if I want our heroine to be inflatable or not, as it could be fun to have a normal human interacting with these balloon-ladies... but I would also like to have her inflatable and see it from her perspective. Sadly, I'm not great with the details, if any writer on here would be willing to help work out these kinks, I would love the help!
Thank you all!
Cal
Tue, 08/26/2014 - 14:16
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Thu, 08/28/2014 - 00:40
#4
Auriga
For this purpose I share my stories at the google drive. It allows anyone with the link read, and even edit if the person has a google account (e.g. mail or youtube) so I can add him or her to the list of editors.
Thu, 08/28/2014 - 00:41
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Auriga
An example https://docs.google.com/document/d/10SvDM_FDJyM1ghu17hJCx8MbIzw6I5zlbGYJVj7S9yU/edit
Thu, 08/28/2014 - 11:01
#6
Ok, thats a smart idea! I'll try and set that up if I can. If not, can I email it to whomever wishes to read?
Thu, 08/28/2014 - 13:22
#7
Sorry, I'm just not ready to potentially breach my privacy just yet. Anyone got a Furaffinity account? I can put it up there freely for reading in it's current state, or I could make a new google account for this purpose. Suggestions? I will gladly do a google doc provided somone assures me it is private and all, I'm new to them.
Here's the FA page with it.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14389961/
Fri, 10/03/2014 - 04:46
#8
What if she's not inflatable and she interviews these club members, so that they tell her how they feel - in real time. Say, she is a journalist, and she writes an analytic article about this whole club, defending their view of the world and themselves, defending their rights?
It could go like a story of a minority in a fantasy world. This way you won't have to decide whether your heroine is inflatable or not and will have it both ways.
Twenty pages?... damn! anyhow, it might be easier to help, if one were able to read what you've written so far.