Anybody here read my story?

A couple of years ago, I wrote a story called "Wanda Winkle and the Blimping Bakery"--it seemed to be popular, but I never got any specific feedback on it.
Has anyone here read it? What did you think? What did I "get right" and where did I miss the mark? I ask because this was only my second attempt at an inflation story, and I need some pointers. (Please be gentle, it's only my second time.) :wink:
-Ed Lundt

Kurg

To be honest, I've never even heard of it. Where did you post it? I haven't seen it here on Bodyinflation.org. I'd be happy to critique it if you can provide me with a link.

"A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men."

elpub

Actually, I don't post my stuff... I sell it by mail. Most of the stuff is giantess-growth and BE (written and illustrated by others I've hired) but I occasionally write an inflation story myself.
Sorry I can't help you out with a link to the story, but the description of it can be found on elpub.com (under "new illustrated stories").

Wren

I'll have to dig it up and read it again, but I remember that I liked it. The only thing that I remember I didn't like was some of the illustrations. That artist is pretty good at B.E., but for other types of inflation, his techinque looks like he took a normal sized woman, sawed her in half at the waist, and then stuck the halves on opposite ends of an amorphous blob. Maybe it's just personal preference, but I don't like that look and can't think of any other artist who draws inflation that way. The story itself was pretty good.

airtankgirl5
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Never read nor heard of them. After looking at the website, there's a little bit that might be sorta inflation related, but I personally would have to be convinced before dropping that sort of money on it. But I'm fussy that way

humbugmst3k

I've read it, several times. It is amazing and I had purchased several items thru E. L. Publications back in the day.

Lurking since ye olde "acotto" days; much has changed...

Link2Hyrule

Personally, I'd like to know what happened to the stories since the ELPub site went defunct.  I know Bust Artist got the rights to the BE Stories, but what about the GTS and WG stories?