OK thanks, assuming that you actually meant to write Prologue 1, Prologue 2, 1, 4, Epilogue then I can see what your comments are about.
OK it sounds like toying with clothing is the way to go. I'll try to maybe ink the text (like in Blimp Race 1) so it can be easier read... in time though I'd like to move on to inking the whole lot on computer like most of the top artists do. I was wondering what people thought about the pencil shading behind the colour, whether I should try and move to the whole thing being traced on computer, or if I should leave the pencil shading and detail.
As a side: the girl being inflated is Danni, Vaughan is the Inflater, she returns.
The Pumping for Shits and Giggles series:
Epilogue: I like the idea. I also like the Vaughan's hair but her butt looks a little off. It looks too big for pre inflation.
Second: I can't read out too well what they're saying. But It's neat seeing her stomach showing out between her shirt and pants. Always a nice effect on inflation.
Third: It's pretty nice seeing the way Vaughan's breasts forming out of her shirt. The outline of her underwear outlining out of her pants is a nice touch to her inflation.
Fourth: Good explotion effect and I like the muli colored BOOMPH!
Fifth: It's cool how the other girls hair is messed up due to the explosion. Good scene of post explosion. Nice knickers BTW.
I like your style you got wrinkles in clothing and folds and shades. You need to clean up what you write so we can read it easier.