I said it was excellent at Deviant Art, except he needed to space out the final paragraph.
I'll try my hand at this story stuff
Hey,
I'm always reading other people's stuff and looking at their art, but I have never contributed. Therefore, I thought I would, whether I suck or not. :) So I wrote a story at my deviantart account.
http://danthemann8.deviantart.com/
It's my first story and is just a simple blueberry sotry. Doesn't have much plot or anything. But hey, I'm trying. Don't want to be a leecher :)
If anyone reads it and has feedback, it would be appreciated.
P.S. I know there's a story section of the discussion forums, but no one seems to post there much, so I put it here.
Im no treplying, cuz Im not into blueberry, so I shouldnt be writing here...hehe
Hey, so I wrote a second story. I think it's much improved over the first one. So if you want to check it out, then go to the link in the first post. :)
I second his second story, it's even better than the first. Though I still really like his first.
No one's gonna reply? I thought it was an excellent story! Nice descriptions.
And such is me! I'm always bored and always open to chat or what have you. ^^