http://www.bodyinflation.org/index.php?name=coppermine&file=displayimage&album=17&pos=0
I was wondering how this works as a finished piece, particularly the following aspects:
1. Line Work. How are the lines drawn? Could it be smoother / neater / simpler / more detailed?
2. Coloring. Do the colors and shading work? Is it too flat, or over done?
3. The piece as a whole. With the background and shading, how does this come off as a finished piece?
4. Inflation type: How does te actual inflation look?
AB
Id say her face could use a little tiny poof, and maybe her stomach could be shifted a bit upwards, as if she was bending back....do I make sense? know sort of what I mean? oh well.
As for everything else, I dont have an eye for it, but Id also say its perfect.
I wouldn't call this perfect. Probably the biggest problem I have is the face. It's slanted ans shows only few signs of proper proportion/perspective technique. I'd Google some face-drawing anatomy, if I were you. Even if it's cartoon face-drawing.
2) Very nice.
3) The shadows are a giveaway; it does not look integrated into the scene to me, and I think it's because she's casting a round shadow below, instead of a shadow based on her actual shape. I mean, maybe it's high noon...? :)
1. perfect
2. perfect
3. perfect
4. perfect
er... if you really want me to pick at hairs to come out with something that you might try and improve, I don't think she's quite symmetrical, but that's OK, life isn't symmetrical and it's completly natural (as far as inflation goes), even charming for her to maybe bulge out a little unevenly :)
It's just overall really well done, I normally love your work but I especially love this style, maybe because it is more towards the 'inflated with something light' end of your own personal spectrum :)