http://bodyinflation.org/index.php?name=Archive&op=Display&storyID=241
This board seems to be an alright place to post this. And no one got mad at me when I did it for the Hermione Balloon.
Feedback? I tried to do what everyone suggested last time. I was really hoping that I've gotten better at writing.
Don't worry I'm way ahead of you. This was posted at Deviantart long before it made it here. The third part's already up in fact.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47212906/
Well, I must say I wasn't expecting that French girl to be the victim in the third one, but it was a good story.
Please tell me Pansy is going to get it soon and big time. I want to see Draco's reaction when his snobby girlfriend gets a bad case of gas.
Oh she'll get it sometime within the next trilogy. But wasn't nice of me to give a tiny taste of her inflated?
It was nice, but I'd like to see her as a big blimp. After all, all that hot air she's full of has to catch up with her sometime, lol.
By the way, besides Pansy, are you going to bring any other girls into the inflation experience?
Probably. I plan on the next trilogy being one big story that is cut up into three parts. I just need to get the writing just right so it's epic enough.
I knew that only giving Pansy a bloated stomach wasn't going to be enough. Like I said, tip of the iceberg.
And I'm not telling you whom else I plan to blow up.
Oh, I just wanted to know if you were going to bring any other girls into the inflation fold. You don't have to tell me who they'll be (I've actually got a good guess on several of them)
Wow, I had forgotten about the french girl, and how Hermoine and Ginny cant stand her...;) See where Im going?
I see where you're going Darth but I'm afraid not.
*a light spoiler to the third story*
Fleur and Hermione had a bit of a bonding momement there.
Dude, I loved the first story. But a word of advice, I'd recommend opening a Deviantart account if you already haven't done so because frankly this place doesn't get a lot of traffic in the story section. I hope this next one is as good as the first ^_^