Kane's new story, Conspiracy

I have to say, LV, you put out all stops in this one. This is one of your best yet. You integrated that "Twilight Zone" kind of vibe you usually have, and incorporated it into college girl inflation fun! It was amazing. You are one of the few who are so creative with their stories, and we all appreciate it. Man, with all the stuff I gotta do, you inspire me to keep trying to delight this bunch of nuts we call the inflation community.

Happy Brithday and congrats on an awesome story. I gotta tell you, I got so excited, not knowing what to expect, when Katie went back to face Trisha!

LutherVKane
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Thanks for the feedback. Knowing how the little details affect people is invaluable. One of the biggest problems I have with story writing, particularly with those that take a really long time to finish, is that by the time I'm done with it I've completely lost any kind of perspective on what the first time reader might see.

I'm really happy that I can get some kind of suspense going in a genre where just about everything's been done already. There will be more Conspiracy in the future.

SvenS
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darth_clone19
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yeah SvenS, I thought of you when I saw the title. lol

I think that if in inflation writing, even if everything has been done, then lets redo it again lol Because if the few writers we have are gone, then its gone for good. Im one who thinks that even if a story isnt original, if its well written, it should be appreciated still. (though Im biased cuz I want people to like my crappy stories lol)

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