Gas Suit

just submitted the story "Gas Suit, which i placed on a few other sites. A lot more popping than people may like, but no gore. Tell me if you like it, reviewsd from other sites has usually been mor positive than negative. My next story will be rather diffreent with both temporary AND permanent bursting!

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I think I read it. Is this the one with the woman that gives a bunch of people a talk of her product, and then it causes jealousy and it ends up with a lot of poppin?

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where can I find it?

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I think in the adultinflationwriters yahoo group

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hfilled

I think i sent it to Kane's site, Pop-In and the kaboom story annex--next story will be about racing and the effect of both temporary and permanent popping (conditions where youi reform after popping, and those theat make it permenent.

DisruptedOriginal

Hfilled, i LOVE your stories. I'm not sure what it is, but they actually turned me on so much :P
i always look forward to more of your stories. :)
Nice work!

hfilled

Thanks! I always try to include a bit more dialogue in my stories, as peoplel in Real Life actually do like to talk. I feel dialogue is as important as anything else in a good story, building up the suspense.