Thanks for the comments inflate123! your video site actually got me into the community!
I decided to write a second story after all! I'd love any comments!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/59401195/
Heres what it has:
Breasts
Butt
Body
Popping (not too gory).
Why your last? I really liked what I read. It was a straightforward story/scenario, but with good pacing, clear details, and good spelling. :)
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