I just read it, and the tension was amazing. I also loved the part about the klaxon alarms.
it's here!!
Tue, 09/25/2007 - 20:41
#3
RenegadeKamui
Fri, 09/28/2007 - 00:58
#4
Thanks guys. You don't know how hard it was to write the ambush without being 1) too grpahic and violent or 2) too boring. I hope to a third story, it might involove a biplane or not. Still have to think about it...
I might do a special weight gain story I kicked around with a few other guys, involving a type of "firm fat" inflation (NOT the saggy type!!) and an evil fitness trainer. Basically, the person/victim gets bigger and firmer with fat with one serum, while another serum makes the fat explosively unstable. What can I say, I'm imginative with a sick mind. I actually did a piece of fiction abouit that once, when I felt that fat=inflation.
Don't know if that will put people off or not. If so, won't bother and will stick to race stories
Fri, 09/28/2007 - 01:31
#5
darth_clone19
I dont mind crazy WG like that when it doesnt involve the details of being saggy and...you know, bleh
Ill be honest. I was a bit disappointed with your new story. Its just that the bulk of it was what you put in the preview. Thats just me.
Sat, 09/29/2007 - 00:24
#6
That's ok, I welcome feedback of any type. It means that SOMEONE is reading them...glad you're open minded enough not to flame me for the alternate form of inflation.
Sat, 09/29/2007 - 03:03
#7
darth_clone19
Well, to be honest, I didnt understand most of it :) but thats probably cuz its been a while since I read the first.
finally!
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