I couldn't agree more! I myself dislike fan-fiction for exactly this reason. I have no idea who the characters are, so why would I care what happens to them?
You had to be there...
I recently watched an episode of SNL and was struck by how unfunny I found it. I got to reminiscing about how funny I once thought the show was but the more I contemplated, the more I realized that what seemed so funny at the time doesn't really seem so now. This is painfully obvious whenever I see a re-run of a "Classic SNL" - I am struck by how unfunny those old episodes often were, too, even though I laughed at the time. Why is this? Is it the awful writing and poor comedic timing? Sometimes, but mostly it's because the show tends to derive its humor from the popular culture in the immediate vicinity of the show. Once a referenced event in pop culture is no longer relevant, the joke becomes stale and unfunny. In fact, worse than unfunny: pathetic. In both cases (the old and the new), I have absolutely no idea or context as to what is being lampooned. It's not surprising to note that the live audience often feels the same way and this can often be heard in its unsteady laughter.
"So, Sven" you may be thinking. "What does this have to do with the Writer's den?" Ah - I'm glad you asked. It's has to do with good artwork and writing that stands on it's own without the crutch of relying on someone else's work. It's about why fan fiction is almost universally bad. Fan fiction is so frequently bad because it deigns to forsake plot and character development with the assumption that the reader already knows the pertinent expository character and plot developments. It's also why I have so little interest in Anime-based art. Unless the reader/viewer is intimately knowledgeable about the subject, there is no context and there is no story - it's all just a bunch of pointers to another's work and it's a waste of my time. "You had to be there..." is not a satisfactory plot development.
A good story should stand on it's own - even a sequel. A reader should not be burdened with having to search for the meaning of every reference dropped in a story. That's not to say that a story series can't be self-referential. Knowing the basis for a plot development should enhance the readers experience but, conversely, not knowing the reference shouldn't detract from that experience. There is a cultural level with which an author must make the assumption that the audience is familiar, but the more specialized that level is set, the more limited the interest of the audience will be. Of course, nothing is stopping an author from writing fan fiction, but there should be no surprises when the work is not well received.
Put yourself in your readers' place: if they had never seen or heard of Goddamn Wing Sailor Ghost IV, do you really think they'll get the joke when Puukatyou says "Rrr-rrr-snarf"? The correct answer is: "No, Sven, they will not."
I want to read good stories. I want to see authors improve. If you are serious about developing your writing skills, then you must free yourself of the urge to write fan fiction and instead practice developing your own plots and characters.
I think you're a little too hard on the concept, but I see where you're coming from. In my Teen Titans story, I tried to make it as accessible to people unfamiliar to the series as possible. Beast Boy wasn't taken seriously in the Doom Patrol (not the "Brotherhood of Doom", bah, stupid me for trying to write when I had the flu), he saw a girl he liked, and that's all you need to know.
Well, mostly. I never got around to explaining Raven's demonic transformation in the lounge, or the nature of her powers in general until near the end. This is probably my sloppiest story, and I intend to submit a revised version at some point if LK will post it. My point is, fanfiction doesn't HAVE to to be annoyingly self-referential and inscrutiable to outside audiences. The problem is that most fanfic writers are infatuated with their subject, and can't conceive of anyone reading their stories not knowing what they do.
I'll admit, I've written lots of Derivative work, but never straight out fan-fiction. I like people to have something they can identify with, but at the same time, I don't want to isolate others.
I think fan/derivative stories are really only written for the author, and anybody else who gets it, gets it. I don't find myself drawn to them because it's almost exclusionary -- if you don't get this joke, oh well. But at the same time, if someone just wants to write, I'd rather see them do something that makes them happy and then, later on, see their other option. My later stories are very different from my earlier ones.
I'm torn on the fan fiction stories.
Inflate123 hits on one of their more common weaknesses: they're written primarily for the author. This isn't an issue exclusive to fanfic, but it does pop up a lot.
The other big issue is that they often attract authors who think that writing for a preexisting universe is easier. It looks that way at first glance. You already have a setting and cast of characters with a familiar audience. But I believe that fan fiction is harder to do well than original work.
Every world has it's own history and mythology, and you have to remain true to these in order to make the story work. If you break from canon willy-nilly, then you're going to wind up with what I call an S&R fanfic: you could just as easily take an original work, run a Search and Replace on a few names and key words, and it makes just as much sense.
In order to write good fanfic, you have see the original work as a basis to be extended rather than contorted to suit your particular aim. If you're just using fanfic as a crutch to get out of the task of building a world and characters, then your story's going to limp.
When I say derivative- I should say that may of my stories are meant to emulate a certain form of fiction (I.E; Super-Heroes, Swords and Sorcery, Ect...) as opposed to a certain work of fiction...
Heck, I wanted to make a couple inflation stories based on the late Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series (think Red/Balck Ajah with inflation magic)...but again, that woule assume everyones in on the joke, so...
Lest anybody think that I'm singling them out, honestly - I'm not. I'm ranting against the practice in general, though I'll concede that Inflate123 is right when he says that any writing is better than none.
But if you're trying to write for a broader audience, I think it's a good rule-of-thumb to avoid the practice. Would the story line you've created make any sense if you did the reverse of what Luther talks about and replaced the fanfic/celebrity characters with some generic ones you've created?
Inflate123 has a good post at his blog from a while back that has some good advice: inflate123.blogspot.com/2005/03/advice-for-writers.html and re-reading it, I find that he articulates what I'm trying to communicate much more effectively.
When I say derivative- I should say that may of my stories are meant to emulate a certain form of fiction (I.E; Super-Heroes, Swords and Sorcery, Ect...) as opposed to a certain work of fiction...
This strikes me as different -- that's just riffing on a genre, not a specific work. I don't know the unique relationships between the characters of Cowboy Bebop, but I do understand the broader strokes of "bounty hunters in space." I don't need to know what or where Rivendell is to appreciate "this story has inflatable elves in it." Hell, I think Pneumatica City is a great example of how to play with superheroes without namechecking any copyrighted characters -- we all get the concept and can even make sly in-jokes to people who might get them without alienating those who won't.
If you can play in the sandbox without forcing me to live in one specific sand castle, I think that's a good thing. (Or, do the Pnuematica thing and invite everybody to build their own sand castle, so everybody has the same frame of reference.)
Borrowing some others universe, instead of making your own, is a sign of insufficient fantasy/creativity. Author may be inspired by someones work, and even use some elements he(she) enjoyed most, while devising a plot of his(her) own.
Fukureru-Shogun wrote:
When I say derivative- I should say that may of my stories are meant to emulate a certain form of fiction (I.E; Super-Heroes, Swords and Sorcery, Ect...) as opposed to a certain work of fiction...This strikes me as different -- that's just riffing on a genre, not a specific work. I don't know the unique relationships between the characters of Cowboy Bebop, but I do understand the broader strokes of "bounty hunters in space." I don't need to know what or where Rivendell is to appreciate "this story has inflatable elves in it." Hell, I think Pneumatica City is a great example of how to play with superheroes without namechecking any copyrighted characters -- we all get the concept and can even make sly in-jokes to people who might get them without alienating those who won't.
If you can play in the sandbox without forcing me to live in one specific sand castle, I think that's a good thing. (Or, do the Pnuematica thing and invite everybody to build their own sand castle, so everybody has the same frame of reference.)
Thats exactly my idea. Its sort of a compromise- people familiar with the genre will have something easy to recognize, whereas those who don't won't be completely lost.
Hear, hear! Excellent post, and most useful advice.