Questions on chapter 2 of the epic.

I'm getting a little concerned, what do you people think? I mean, I understand that there probably wasn't enough room to post any thing else there so give me what you got here.

uhcm

*a Buddhist monk sits before you and I step in front of him as he is about to speak*

Heed the words from someone who used to be nervous about getting the story right and/or getting the feedbacks for it.

*fixing a TV antenna* Getting feedbacks will be a long grueling time to wait for in the internet. So be patient about it or don't give a *holds up an owl* hoot about it and be confident about it. Plus, criticisms will be a great lesson you'll ever get, only if they don't go personal. Personal based criticisms are the ones not to give *holds up a random gamer* a hoot about. For generals like Spelling, Grammar or Progression flaws, those are the ones to *holds up a rabbit* keep the good two eyes on.

*shows you a shovel* Ya dig?

*dressed like an old kung fu master* Now, hop to it about more stories if you wish, Young *holds up a grasshopper* Grasshopper. *flicks the grasshopper away and it hit someone*

Kim Lane: Ow! Bastard! *Holding her right eye, Kim chases uhcm as he leaves the room*

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thegassyshadow

Thank you ohhhh wise master! "Hollers as chase leads off into the distance"
You got any complaints?

I am the spreader of chaos, the evil that haunts the darkest corners of the human mind I'm the... PFFFFFT!!!!!! Crap, I ripped a big one.

uhcm

*Appears beside thegassyshadow* No complaints.

Now to continue a pointless chase scene because Kim is still wondering about my absence, not to mention how I got here under a second. *disappears in a puff of smoke*

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thegassyshadow

I need to know how the second chapter was in the epic. I'm about ready to start the next phase.

I am the spreader of chaos, the evil that haunts the darkest corners of the human mind I'm the... PFFFFFT!!!!!! Crap, I ripped a big one.