which format...which format...JBS is returning but different
I'm thinking of reviving the Julie Basket Series, but I'm going to remake it into one format. Yes, the storyline will be very different from before and probably be in my particular theme. High details and deep storytelling; probably new characters too.
Just wondering about the specifics.
:? In this website, how much space is the max limit for a single submit of a story?
:? Which format is more favorable; Text-Focused, Mixed, or Dialogue-Focused?
and
:? What is the restrictions on this site? Like "No Sex, No Violence", those restrictions.
Why am I asking these? Because I'm thinking of submitting of probably one or couple episodes into one submission in this website. Plus, I'm starting to miss making the series. :lol:
I've been working on the episodes and I was curious. Which one of those two sample paragraphs would be easier to be read?
Paragraph 1: With nicknames as substitution for having the actual name said twice or more while targeting the same character.
Not insightful of her current distress, naked, and obsidian-haired, Vikira was chained to the wall, unable to stop two men from using her as a fetish toy with their air compressor. Helpless, the kidnapped woman pleads and screams as airflow jets into her anus. She groans as she felt the air filling her belly and there she witnesses what she feared. Her belly begins to bulge outward as it struggles to contain the excess gaseous content. Slowly, but steadily, her belly continues to swell as the pressure increases. The growing victim continues the plead, but her cries was in vain as the men were too distracted with their inflatable maiden. The belly continues to bulge, threatening to swallow any part of her deforming body.
Paragraph 2: Not using nicknames as substitutes.
Not insightful of her current distress, naked, and obsidian-haired Vikira was chained to the wall, unable to stop two men from using her as a fetish toy with their air compressor. Helpless, the kidnapped Vikira pleads and screams as airflow jets into her anus. She groans as she felt the air filling her belly and there she witnesses what she feared. Her belly begins to bulge outward as it struggles to contain the excess gaseous content. Slowly, but steadily, her belly continues to swell as the pressure increases. The growing Vikira continues the plead, but her cries was in vain as the men were too distracted with their inflatable maiden. The belly continues to bulge, threatening to swallow any part of Vikira's deforming body.
These are examples, not part of the series itself.
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