Criticism please - i'm really bad at drawing

Hello, i've never posted in this particular section before.

For many years, i've written inflation stories which i've personally found very satisfying, and i've also posted a few on the net in various places. I'm not too bad at it, but i don't know if other people like what i write.

Anyway, recently i've been pursuing a rather different project. I've written a sort of spoof manual which describes how to inflate people and also done some illustrations. The text is sort of OK, but the pictures are pretty dire because i really can't draw well.

I'm thinking of posting some of the pictures in the image gallery here, but the quality is pretty low. If i do that, would it be possible for anyone either to make suggestions as to what's good and bad with each picture, or maybe (and i understand if this is a request nobody wants to follow up) to redraw any of the pictures but better? I was thinking of the themes basically remaining the same but i understand that it might be very time-consuming, and it may be unfair to ask others to do this when they'd prefer to draw their own stuff.

Also, besides all that, does anyone actually want to see what i've done?

Remember: I'm into realistic inflation, so this is what it is.

Thanks for reading this

kingdemon815

I'd like you to send me a copy of this. my email is Kingdemon815@live.com

Inflate123
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I love this idea -- that's really fun. I'd shop around for an artist and not release it publicly until you're really happy with it. Sounds like the perfect opportunity for a collaboration, so both elements can be as good as possible.

nineteenthly

Thanks for the enthusiasm, it's great to hear that!

I'll do that. I'm not too sure about the tone of the text and i may change it, but the subject of the pictures at least is OK even if the quality isn't up to much. Kingdemon, i'll send you the pictures now.

http://www.youtube.com/user/nineteenthly

 

kingdemon815

Thank you. please send me the finished text asap.

Kadche

I would always love to see some new artwork. :) If you would like and have YIM, you can even contact me there and I'll see what I can help you with if anything.

nineteenthly

Thanks. I can try to IM, but i don't get much opportunity to do that. I think i should probably post them on a file hosting site and link to them here. Or, of course, i could just stick them on here.

Kingdemon, i have *a* text, a whole document in fact, in the form of a PDF, but i will probably change it. I'll send you it.

http://www.youtube.com/user/nineteenthly

 

kingdemon815

Thanks.

nineteenthly

The pictures are here on Deviant Art:

http://nineteenthly.deviantart.com/art/Clothing-118633651

http://nineteenthly.deviantart.com/art/First-person-118633495

http://nineteenthly.deviantart.com/art/Stage-2-118633255

There are others i haven't uploaded.

There's also a whole document but i can't link to it.

http://www.youtube.com/user/nineteenthly