I read Bloating News at 9 just because blueberry stuff isn't my cup of tea, and I enjoyed it. Good pacing. And while there was a popping ending, it was not terribly graphic -- at least not by comparison to some of the other popping stories I've read.
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I've posted several stories on my DA account, and I was wondering what y'all think of them.
Warning, a lot of the stories have popping.
Sun, 01/31/2010 - 16:56
#3
Inflate123
Sun, 01/31/2010 - 17:11
#4
Yeah, can't exactly be said for some of my bluberry ones. :p
Like I said on DA, there's another non-blueberry one. It does involve an Anime character which i'm pretty sure you don't know of, but I don't think that'd get in the way of enjoying the inflation.
Tue, 02/02/2010 - 20:15
#5
I've only started reading Kryptonian Berries but I did like the way you used the first part to help build up suspence and establish characters rather than diving head long into the blowing up of people. The the descriptions of things (surroundings, people etc) were good as well.
Tue, 02/02/2010 - 23:15
#6
Yeah, Took a lot of time to build up the scene. Thought the fact there was no inflation might be off putting to the demographic that reads these stories, but its my most viewed work so what do you know? :p
Wed, 02/03/2010 - 02:30
#7
darth_clone19
Bloating News was great.
Wed, 02/03/2010 - 03:08
#8
Yeah, thanks. Any comments or critiques?
BTW, if you want another non-blueberry inflation, there's Major's Bad Day. I think you'd appreciate it even if you've never seen the anime/manga.
Thu, 02/04/2010 - 02:53
#9
darth_clone19
I really liked Bloating News, dont have anything negative to say about it, really.
Thu, 02/04/2010 - 06:51
#10
Yes, but I just like knowing what struck people as 'good' about my work and what is lacking at the moment. That way I know how to write better stories.
Thu, 02/04/2010 - 07:59
#11
darth_clone19 wrote:
Bloating News was great.
Seconded, and how!
Thu, 02/04/2010 - 08:30
#12
Enjoy it? :p What struck you about it?
Fri, 02/05/2010 - 02:15
#13
darth_clone19
Well, it wasnt original, but thats what I like. I like it when botchy women get inflated and then cant stop whats happening to them; even more when the people around her are glad to be rid of her lol
Sun, 02/07/2010 - 03:33
#14
Well I never said Bloating News was an original piece. Just wanted to put SOMETHING up that wasn't just another blueberry story.
Any thoughts?