how bout a berry girl who inflates as big as a house or town or something? XD
Taking Blueberry Inflation Story Requests
I am now taking requests for Blueberry Inflation Stories. Please inquire by replying to this forum. I am open to almost any idea because I myself have run out of ideas and now I need your opinions. Your opinions will most likely be actualy turned into stories. Thank You!
Tue, 05/11/2010 - 01:00
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Wed, 05/12/2010 - 02:02
#4
Like the Jack and the beanstalk idea thanks. I think I might try that one out.
Wed, 05/12/2010 - 02:15
#5
airtankgirl5
Actually that beanstalk variant might even be something you could submit to airy tales if you felt like it
Wed, 05/12/2010 - 02:32
#6
Just a thought as far as the intro is concerned, don't copy the actual beginning of Jack and the bean stock verbatim (evil mother, trade cow for beans, etc). Perhaps make it like the gal is trying to win a berry competition, whoever can grow the biggest berry wins. Then you have a perfect connection/transition to the ideas mentioned earlier. She finds the berries in the sky says "ha! Now I'll win for sure!" she tries one, becomes a berry, is force fed berries by cartaker until she's huge, he enters her into the contest and wins, end. I dunno, just a thought.
Wed, 05/12/2010 - 03:21
#7
Just be sure to credit me for the idea. ;)
Also when she tries the berry, don't have her go full berry. Just have her get swollen, think the Johnny Swell comic. She starts getting big but it stops and she tries to leave at that point. Then gets caught by the caretaker.
Why not a play on Jack and the Beanstalk? Make it about a girl who climbs grape vine thats coming from the sky. At the top she finds a land in the clouds full of different bushes that grow melon sized berries.
She can't help herself but to try some and the more she eats the more she swells. Eventually getting the attention of the caretaker of the berry bushes. A not to happy giant (or giantess). Who takes the blue girl and makes her even bigger. Will she escape from her BERRY DOOM!
I'm mean.