What do you think?

Hello everyone. I don't know if I'm allowed to do this or not but i'll try anyway. I just recently wrote the story "What We Really Fear" and it has been posted in the story archive (first page). I know it is untraditional so I wanted to see what all of you thought of it. Any and all constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks.

doubleintegral
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I like different, unique stories even if they don't really specifically address the expansion in detail. Although strictly pregnant fantasy is not really my thing, I liked the overall tact of the story.