My problem with turgid & swolles in the past was because I wasn't able to take it a step further than the actual inflation, so I lost interest in writing it, so I came back to it to see if I can finish it.
Here's the synopsis:
- The inflatee is a young upper-class blonde man called David Davidson. Like all my attractive male characters, he's short, cute and dainty in his structure and personality. For the inflation he wears a black and gold pinstripe suit that comes complete with a vest.
- Whenever I do full-body inflations, the final shape is never completely spherical, and instead looks like an extremely round, plump torso, mostly belly, lots of butt and love handle, with incredibly short arms and legs that taper into the hands and feet. The reason it's not spherical is because completely spherical bodies do not fit into my extremely systematic, logical imagination. I can't look at a spherical body and see a body. It just doesn't work for me.
- I never do popping. I think about things from an incredibly realistic, logical perspective, and my BI stories are cute fantasy stories by nature, so if a guy bursts, it's suddenly very serious and no longer cute. I may make suggestions about popping to heighten the suspense, but I never do actual popping.
- My BI stories are supposed to be kind ofcute. They're "childish" by nature, but in a for-older-audiences way. There's nothing all that dark about them, and they don't get exceedingly dirty. I'll get sexual, but only as long as it remains cute.
Here's the synopsis:
The story takes place on the magnificent estate of Janet's family. Janet waits at a table on the patio for her fiance David's arrival, as she has a surprise for him. David shows up, and, knowing that he's a pretty little piece of ass put on this earth for Janet's amusement, displays his outfit for her. Naturally, Janet approves.
The surprise Janet has for David is a strange-looking bottle of wine she found in the pantry, which was apparently supposed to be a gift from her father to her mother. The bottle is unsealed, so, since she knows David has a passion for obscure wine brands, she figures that they can have a sip.
So David has a sip first. He describes for her every sensation of the wine, and then notes how filling the one sip is. Very filling, in fact, he feels like he's going to burst.
And, thus, the swelling process begins. His jacket gets tighter over his front and then pops open, being already tight to begin with. It's mostly his belly and his ass swelling first, getting into fuller, rounder shapes, before the bigger inflation that widens his waist and his hips. His thighs and then calves swell up due to the increasing size of his butt and hips. His arms swell, too, but I still haven't figured out how that really looks like yet (In my DIY, I figured out how most of the transformation looks like except for the arms. The arms are the only parts I haven't yet cracked.).
Naturally, his clothes stretch at the buttons and seams, and then tear up and pop off. He also wears a belt which he removes very quickly.
The inflation stops once he's "swollen into shape", that is, he's become an incredibly rotund, mostly belly body with a massive ass and the mere hint of arms and legs. (Once again, an immensely plump body, not a sphere.)
I haven't yet figured out how the plot moves during the inflation, or after. My stories usually involve the inflatee trying to find a way to return himself to a natural state, while in the meantime learning to deal with his new body.
What do you guys think?
Not every story needs to be all that long - it seems to me that you've already got a good setup and a good feel for the inflation itself, considering the only thing you've not figured out in that respect is the arms.
The big thing that needs addressing is Janet's motivation. Does she know what the wine will do? If so, why does give it to David? Does she share our kink? Does she have a bone to pick with him? Maybe she's just a sadist in general.
I think once you've got that, the plot will form around it naturally.