Ideas for Turgid & Swolles

My problem with turgid & swolles in the past was because I wasn't able to take it a step further than the actual inflation, so I lost interest in writing it, so I came back to it to see if I can finish it.

Here's the synopsis:

- The inflatee is a young upper-class blonde man called David Davidson. Like all my attractive male characters, he's short, cute and dainty in his structure and personality. For the inflation he wears a black and gold pinstripe suit that comes complete with a vest.

- Whenever I do full-body inflations, the final shape is never completely spherical, and instead looks like an extremely round, plump torso, mostly belly, lots of butt and love handle, with incredibly short arms and legs that taper into the hands and feet. The reason it's not spherical is because completely spherical bodies do not fit into my extremely systematic, logical imagination. I can't look at a spherical body and see a body. It just doesn't work for me.

- I never do popping. I think about things from an incredibly realistic, logical perspective, and my BI stories are cute fantasy stories by nature, so if a guy bursts, it's suddenly very serious and no longer cute. I may make suggestions about popping to heighten the suspense, but I never do actual popping.

- My BI stories are supposed to be kind ofcute. They're "childish" by nature, but in a for-older-audiences way. There's nothing all that dark about them, and they don't get exceedingly dirty. I'll get sexual, but only as long as it remains cute.

Here's the synopsis:

The story takes place on the magnificent estate of Janet's family. Janet waits at a table on the patio for her fiance David's arrival, as she has a surprise for him. David shows up, and, knowing that he's a pretty little piece of ass put on this earth for Janet's amusement, displays his outfit for her. Naturally, Janet approves.

The surprise Janet has for David is a strange-looking bottle of wine she found in the pantry, which was apparently supposed to be a gift from her father to her mother. The bottle is unsealed, so, since she knows David has a passion for obscure wine brands, she figures that they can have a sip.

So David has a sip first. He describes for her every sensation of the wine, and then notes how filling the one sip is. Very filling, in fact, he feels like he's going to burst.

And, thus, the swelling process begins. His jacket gets tighter over his front and then pops open, being already tight to begin with. It's mostly his belly and his ass swelling first, getting into fuller, rounder shapes, before the bigger inflation that widens his waist and his hips. His thighs and then calves swell up due to the increasing size of his butt and hips. His arms swell, too, but I still haven't figured out how that really looks like yet (In my DIY, I figured out how most of the transformation looks like except for the arms. The arms are the only parts I haven't yet cracked.).

Naturally, his clothes stretch at the buttons and seams, and then tear up and pop off. He also wears a belt which he removes very quickly.

The inflation stops once he's "swollen into shape", that is, he's become an incredibly rotund, mostly belly body with a massive ass and the mere hint of arms and legs. (Once again, an immensely plump body, not a sphere.)

I haven't yet figured out how the plot moves during the inflation, or after. My stories usually involve the inflatee trying to find a way to return himself to a natural state, while in the meantime learning to deal with his new body.

What do you guys think?

Fukureru-Shogun

Not every story needs to be all that long - it seems to me that you've already got a good setup and a good feel for the inflation itself, considering the only thing you've not figured out in that respect is the arms.

The big thing that needs addressing is Janet's motivation. Does she know what the wine will do? If so, why does give it to David? Does she share our kink? Does she have a bone to pick with him? Maybe she's just a sadist in general.

I think once you've got that, the plot will form around it naturally.

turgidandswolles

No, she doesn't. The reason why she decides to give him the wine is because David is fascinated by obscure wine brands. She's as shocked as David is by the inflation. They're a happy couple, and have no problems at the moment.

The story also, before the inflation begins, sets up the following facts about an apparent background story that never takes main stage:
- Janet mentions to David that her mother hasn't been around for the past couple of days, without explanation. She writes it off as she's on a business trip and simply forgot to tell her.
- The bottle was hidden underneath many cans in the back of the pantry.
- A note saying "For Violet" (her mother's name) in her father handwriting, taped to the bottle. Janet reasons that her father meant to give this to her mother as a surprise present.
- The bottle is unsealed.

Janet and David are at first shocked and horrified by the inflation, but after he finishes and the shock wears off a little, she finds a lot of fun in rolling him. David experiences a degree of sexual pleasure from the sensation of inflating and being incredibly bloated, but he's too shocked to be able to enjoy it. He's very indignant about being rolled, as well.

"'Turgid & Swolles', brewing the world's most filling wine since 1964."

Fukureru-Shogun

That makes sense - I think the fact that they are both surprised will add some fun tension to the actual scene.

Setting up hints of a back round is actually a favorite technique of mine; It makes the inflation story feel like one scene out of a larger plot, which just makes it feel more genuine to me.

Auriga
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Wine was intended to be found? Who was behind this? Was Janet intended to be the one who tastes the wine?
Is there a way to deflate Dave back? If so will he be an ordinary guy after this or an inflatable one?
You can answer these questions in a way that seem logical to you and get kind of a plot.

I'd added a conspiracy of 'inflatables' out there (Janet mothers wants her 'initiation'). Before that moment it was strictly girls only club, but Dave messes things. Janet founds she can deflate him to the normal shape, inflate to almost spherical or even deflate completely. She founds about conspiracy stuff, and decides to hide him as codex of The Club insists of popping any males if they ever been introduced by mistake. Janet and Dave find old records of such a frightening story.
How will they hide Dave from the conspiracy? And how to conceal the fact that Dave is now inflatable from ordinary people? He can not swim in the pool or go out in the windy weather. Hugh, being swept by the wind literally ^^
Well. Lots of space for imagination.

darth_clone19
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If you have a problem visualising, then you dont see inflation art. Its never been a problem for me for just that reason.

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turgidandswolles

He inflates with liquid, so he's actually very heavy and won't be swept away.

Whether or not he will float, though, depends on whether or not wine is buoyant in water.

darth_clone: I'm not sure what you mean.

If you mean that I don't look at inflation art, I draw the stuff. I have an extensive knowledge of the external human anatomy which I used to work out how most of the inflation will logically appear, but not the arms.

I figured that the story behind Janet's parents would be similar to the situation between Janet and David. So far I've implied that the wine's been passed between many, many people over the ages.

"'Turgid & Swolles', brewing the world's most filling wine since 1964."

lurker1912

Hope this idea hasn't been left to die, I'd love to read this story when it's done :)

WendigoSkin

It's a very well-built story, I hope you go ahead.