Nice, and a little creepy, Supernatural style.
Have you already written that? If so, when would you be going to publish that?
My idea of a story
I have an idea for a story and would like to hear feedback on what you people think.
There has been stories of some wierd creature roaming around the town causing mischief. This creature is called the Nocturnal because it only comes out in the night. This Creature is described as being dark, ghostly, fangs, humanoid body like its from space, and has three horns protruding from the back of its head. If anyone goes near the Nocturnal they will be bitten by its fangs and injected with mysterious venom, which causes the victims to blow up like balloons and possibly meet their end. A few people live to tell about it are found blown up as big as a hot air balloon, but those that don't survive are found in peices scattered on where they met their ballooning doom.
The main character I had for this story is a 20 year old blonde woman with green eyes whose name is Kacey.
Mon, 10/04/2010 - 16:09
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Mon, 10/04/2010 - 16:29
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inflatingclothes
hfilled wrote:
I like it, provided it isn't gory.
I'm the same
Mon, 10/04/2010 - 20:42
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Don't worry it won't be gory. This is my first time writing a story from my imagination, so please give me plenty of feedback so I may know what to work on.
I like it, provided it isn't gory.