Can I have general help on writing an inflation story?

Submitted by Matelyn85 on Sat, 06/18/2011 - 03:41

I'm trying to figure out how I can write better stories for my boyfriend when it comes down to inflation. It's his thing, and I'm completely cool with it and would like to support it in anyway I can. I'm personally into different...genre of sexytime, so it's hard for me to relate but I'd like to try. He likes stories but I've no idea what to write, or what the inflation process should be, and I know he's getting bored with the general little story I've been using.

Any kind of guidance / help would be incredibly helpful. <3

Sat, 06/18/2011 - 05:05

alorok

Well there are hundreds of things that can be said for writing something that is romantic and/or erotic, writing an inflation piece is its own challenge.

If the story is meant to be straight out erotic. Then I recommend comparing the inflation to sexual arousal. As in the longer it goes on the more hot and bothered both people become. As well as that sense of pressure and trying to hold physical passion in, or just releasing it. Try to compare size and descriptions with normal arousal.

If you're looking into more romance, then having unique unrealistic characters really helps. But familiar, try to think of reasons why a character would be looking for love in that way. Would either lover feel that inflation is odd? Or is it simply a way of expressing physical love in an unusual way? Or totally normal?

As for scenarios, there are several scenarios that have become tropes in themselves. But again that depends on if you're writing a full story or just a piece of romantic erotica. Most normal romance cliche's can be used as a basis for inflation love stories.

So... yeah. My advice is to focus on writing a romantic/sexual piece and compare the inflation to physical arousal. Yeah... that's all I can think of saying.

Sat, 06/18/2011 - 11:07

Fleetingsanity

Another thing to think on is to try to write stories that you'll both like. You say you're not into inflation yourself well then add what you like into the story as well. I know I find it harder to write about something I don't really enjoy so in that case I'll add in some stuff that I do like. That makes the process easier and more enjoyable to me.

Also it probably wouldn't hurt for you to have a look on the internet for other expansion stories. You say you use the same general idea well have a look around see what else is out there. Reading other stories will give you ideas of how many different ways inflation can be done.

And Alorok is definitely right arousal and expansion are generally tied. The bigger the person inflating gets the more turned on and hot they become. Now mind you this isn't always the case but for the most part it is and I assume this is what you're going for.

But again I would say the biggest thing is don't just write it for the sake of writing it. It's great that you want to do something nice for your boyfriend. Just don't be afraid to make it so you like it as well. It'll make writing it and reading it more fun.

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Sun, 06/19/2011 - 02:48

airtankgirl5

Can you find out which inflation authors he likes? That might give you a sense of how to tailor your efforts.

Sun, 06/19/2011 - 04:16

doubleintegral

airtankgirl5 wrote:

Can you find out which inflation authors he likes? That might give you a sense of how to tailor your efforts.

I was going to suggest this as well. Asking him what his favorite inflation stories are (and why) will help narrow down his specific preferences. You can then incorporate those into your story, perhaps with your own little twists.

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Sun, 06/19/2011 - 04:16

Matelyn85

I know he mentioned "Wonker", this seven part series on Deviant Art. There were several others but I'm afraid I can't think of them off the top of my head. When I'm writing / story over the phone, when I'm not nervous, I throw in my own spin on stuff. Things to make me laugh, which in turn makes him laugh, to try to make it fun and make me less nervous.

I remember him talking about a step by step inflation process, but I accidentally deleted the texts. Sometimes after the intro, I don't know where to start.

Sun, 06/26/2011 - 21:01

gHassy

So is he into fruit inflation/TF in particular? You wanna try hitting his sweet spot.

Sun, 07/17/2011 - 18:41

darth_clone19

You have got to be the best girlfriend in the world.

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Sat, 08/20/2011 - 09:54

degausser

Well, for one, there are some general writing guides that can be found here:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2729024/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2765125/ http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2922231/

But really, and I know the rest of the community will kill me for saying this, if it's not fun for you to write, don't do it. Listen, I get writing or drawing for someone else, but if you, personally, aren't invested in it, then it's probably not going to be fun for you or fun for anyone else. If your boyfriend is any kind of decent he isn't going to care if you share his fantasy or not, just as long as you two are sympatico. So don't try and force the issue, just have fun with your stuff and he has fun with his. It's awesome that you two are cool with each other's proclivities, and certainly be supportive, but don't try to force it, it'll only end up making you less happy about the situation.

Mon, 08/22/2011 - 03:35

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nineteenthly

I think that's probably true. However, and this may be wishful thinking, i'm also wondering if getting into something like this enough to write about it excitingly might be enough for some people to discover their inner inflation fetishist. Then again, that could just be like the common male heterosexual fantasy that all women are in fact lesbians but just haven't found out yet.

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Sun, 02/26/2012 - 11:04

(Reply to #9) #11

Inflate123

"if it's not fun for you to write, don't do it"

I'm not gonna kill you for that. I'm gonna applaud you for that. You have to have some connection to the material and build upon that. If it's not your personal thing, can you write him a story incorporating how you see it from your perspective?

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Tue, 09/13/2011 - 08:18

#12

The_One

It all comes down to what floats his boat. The body inflation fetish is categorized into Breast Inflation, Butt Inflation, Full Body Inflation, Blueberry Inflation (my fav), Weight Gain etc.

I personally love full body inflation and blueberry inflation, so stories and pictures about that are stored safely in my favourites. I write body inflation stories myself, so I'll try to help all I can. As for writing a body inflation story, just read a few yourself and find out how it's done; all body inflation stories tend to have the same general principle; there's a girl, usually a guy involved or a group of friends, and the girl tends to get helplessly inflated, but it's the process that's tricky to describe, especially if you want it to be different. Something will happen to the girl (Someone will put a hose in her mouth, or she'll swallow some Blueberry Gum) and she'll begin to helplessly inflate while others watch. The story can end how you want it; you can leave a cliffhanger (where the girl is left inflated and your imagination does the rest), she can be deflated (the air/juice/water let out of her) or she can burst (which I'm not a fan of, but it works for a lot of people).

Being his girlfriend, I imagine he'd want you to write it as if you're being inflated. Ask him how you'd like to be inflated, whether it be air, water, or you become a blueberry... maybe he even just wants a specific part of your body inflated. Start off describing what's happening; you put a hose in your mouth, or you swallowed some gum or something... and then it starts. Write about how your clothes are becoming tighter as you expand, keep emphasising how big you're getting with words like "huge", "gigantic", "billowing". It's really a matter of practise, but you'll get the gist of it.

On another note, I take my hat off to you for standing by him and supporting his fetish. A lot of people look down on us as a community of freaks, it's glad to see "normal" people respecting us and our wishes.

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Tue, 10/25/2011 - 21:26

#13

Inflate123

So...how did this go?

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Wed, 02/01/2012 - 00:25

#14

latecomer

I need the same sort of help. If you come up with a solution, please post and share.

But the very basic questions are not hard to deal with. For example, do you know what his favorite fantasies are? Can you find out what his favorite story structure is (first person, omniscient narrative, etc.)? Then the thing to do is what all writers do: dig up examples of what you know your "target audience" will find most enjoyable, study closely, and emulate. Prowess will follow practice.

BTW I think it is very cool that you are willing to indulge him in this way (your boyfriend is a lucky guy!). It is an opportunity to add a new dimension to your relationship and I wish you luck with it.

-latecomer

Sun, 02/12/2012 - 03:08

#15

dracon

see case of help from my point of view.
in my case with my wife fantasiamos much over inflated latexsuits, which we love to imagine and tell us that our suits are inflated in giant sizes.
Respect to the style ... would be different where a history give the viewpoint of the two persons, and not only one person is inflated,but more than one and both give the point of view as the other leaves inflating.
What it would be novel, would be suits that inflate with other forms, as if the couple joined a carnival with costumes andinflation was enjoyed by the two, something that is not only fearthat they are inflated, but who enjoy it as you are getting bigger.

inflatables costumes, suits and clothings

Mon, 02/27/2012 - 16:44

#16

Sticky site lover

Can u make it an suit inflation with a wetsuit in a sauna inflating so big it can't fit through the door and keeps inflating and finally gets thought door but still inflates until it was 100 ft then a crab comes and pinches the butt part of the suit popping it

Can I have general help on writing an inflation story?

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