I like how the woman looks with the suit better than when she appears swimming. I think you have to improve regarding hairs. But I don't blame you. That's difficult. Lately I've been drawing ladies with short hairs to avoid headaches, heh heh.
By the way, the Deviant Art account you mentioned in the video description is still active? I would like to take a look at your other works.
I like the concept -- her suit inflates so big that she literally gets lost in it. My only major complaint is that the inflation itself is done in the blink of an eye, which makes it hard to enjoy properly.