requesting editorial assistance with an inflation story

Latecomer has written his first-ever inflation short story but is reluctant to post it without submitting it first for editorial review by an experienced writer who has a good grasp of the genre and is supportive of newbies like me.  Is anyone here willing to have a look at my story before I embarrass myself to death by posting it without review?

Best regards,

Latecomer

Murkstorm

I could proofread it with regard to usage of the English language and possibly tightening up ambiguous wording to make things clearer to readers who are not native English speakers. However, as far as judging the genre, I would be a poor choice, as my tastes regarding inflation are not what could be called typical. I'm also a little on the prudish side.

latecomer

Thanks, I think I have the grammar, etc. in hand. It's more a question of content/story line and assessing that content against other stories in the Library. I could take a chance and post it as-is, and then vanish from the forum if it gets stinko reviews ;-)  -Latecomer

doubleintegral
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I'll take a look at it for you.  doubleintegral@gmail.com

latecomer

done. Comin' at ya as of one minute ago. I do hope you think it has merit... -Latecomer