The wetsuit part 2 (read part 1 first)

"I have to get Dan back for what he had done to my suits",said Abby."I know I can buy him seim trunks wich I will modifie", said Abby real anxious. She bought a pair of swim trunks and attached a hose nozzel to the butt area. she sealed the nozzel in with rubber cement. Then she covered the whole suit in a goo that stretches. At the beach Abby gave Dan the suit. Before he put the suit on Abby covered the waist area and leg area with rubber cement. As Dan put the suit on the rubber cement attached to his other suit sealing both suits to him. The modified trunks Abby have Dan wear was longer so it was 3 inches from his original bathing suit legs and waist. They both took dans boat to the reefs where she put rubber cement on the air hose and hooked it up to the nozzel that is on his suit. When he jumped in she turned the air pump on to slight trinkle so he wouldn't notice. While the pump was slowly inflating both the modified suit and his original suit Abby and Dan were swimming around when Dan relized he had to take a wiz. "Abby the wate might get warmer"chuckled Dan. As he did his buisness the urine was trapped in his suit. "much better", said Dan. An hour later Dan relized that his suit was a little bigge than normal. "hey Abby looks like my swim trunks inflated a little" he said. " that's right Dan they are and they will get a little bigger "smirked Abby. "wha nevermind", said Dan confused. Just then Abby turned the little trinnkle to a small current. That's when Dan saw that his suit was slowly growing. "wh wh what's going on what did you do to my suit", shouted Dan."nothing just getting my revenge!!!" said Abby. "stop it stop Abby that was a joke what I did to you", cried Dan. "sorry it's to late to apologize now Dan", said Abby as she turnned the current to full blast. "please Abby stop", cried dan. Within minutes dans suit was already 5 feet in diameter. Just then abby pulled up a space heater and plopped it next to dans over inflate suit. "the heat will make you sweat and makes your suit bigger", said Abby as she disconnected. The air hose from the pump and began to pull in Dan. Over 30min the heater made dans suit expand to 10 feet in diameter. Abby pulled a sharp pin a poked dans suit and with a loud "bang" his suit was in peices except for a peice that was hanging around his waist. "hahahahaha you look like something attcked you", laughed abby.

slashkamei

Ok...ok...I know you want to write stories and stuff...but...you REALLY need someone to proof read your stuff BEFORE rapidly posting...because...this stuff is really, REALLY bad. I see constant spelling errors, there is no real flow in the story...your stories need a lot of work.

slayer

He has enthusiasm, I give him that. But like with everything it takes 90 % practise and 10 % talent. So even the person with the lesser talent can become the greatest if he practises enough, and most importanly; practises correct. I should know because I have drawn and played guitar most of my life and in drawing I had a talent from the start and could draw what no kids could do in my class. But when I got to the age of 14, guitar took over and when I started I sucked at guitar and struggeled with what others found easy. But I was dedicated, took private lessons, practised hours and played songs every day. Today I am better on my guitar than I am at drawing. My drawing skills are where I left them at the age of 14! I started to draw again a few weeks ago and saw that I was no better than I was at my age of 14! But I know I can be better faster with drawing and maybe in a few years become what would have taken others with less talent maybe 10 years.

So to you Sticky site lover: Do what you love, keep practising, maybe take lessons, private or public, read a lot of good stories and try to find out what get them good. Right now you should firstly improve on your english, then I would focuse on story writing.

I like that you do suit-inflation as I love the subject myself. What I found good in a suit-inflation story is the build up, and the inflation itself usually happends just at the end.

Hi my name is Tom. I run the inflatable chicks yahoo group