Bursting with Plagiarism - Inflation World

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Bursting with Plagiarism - Inflation World

 

Bursting with Plagiarism

 

So, I’ve decided to throw my hat into the ring. And then got stuck.

Been lurking around, taking care of real life things. But then decided I want to try something different, while stealing several ideas from numerous other writers and products from over the years.

If you’re work is listed here, then feel free to tell me I’m not allowed to use it. Though I may be tempted to include an expy of it.

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I’m going to create a setting for my stories, for my inflation until popping stories. Using a variety of sources of inspiration including but not limited to, stories, games, ramblings, roleplays, and the like. This world will be heavily inflation and popping focused, and only women. (Just how I roll) For the most part, it will be like modern day, but as I think of things history may change here and there. Whatever makes sense.

So- sources I’m taking inspiration from.

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POP.DOS- an old old old body inflation and popping game where you play a woman in a world of inflation, and basically see how long you go before exploding. Included themes will include- voluntarily popping at major life events, voluntary popping after a certain age, popping crime, inflation for recreation and sport.

Owens’ inflation works- Including Inflation Ranch, and Truck Stop. Where inflation and exploding is a largely sexual experience. That there are professionals who willingly pop themselves for others. Prostitution and brothels are commonplace

Nagi’s Inflation Works- Popping is not a big deal. Women pop, it’s what they do. Just sweep up the scraps and move on. Maybe have the great inflation tournament be a part of the Olympics or something. As well as clubs where people come to watch others pop and to be popped. As well as inflation to popping being a warfare/terrorist technique.

Metiok’s Inflation World- basic inspiration for the entire thing. Women inflate, pop. Normal. Serial monogamy and polygamy common. Many many more women than men.

Round91- pregnancy inflation popping. When a woman gets pregnant, she gets pregnant to an insane degree. And swells up with babies until she’s an immobile sphere bursting to let them all out.

“Original” Ideas- From roleplays or roleplay thoughts. Blueberries are innately dangerous, consuming too many of them or being even mildly allergic leads to an explosive ending. (Popped human blueberry juice is not contagious) Random swelling condition. Some women just randomly start blowing up one day, no cause or source of their girth. Swell and swell and swell until they explode. Ultimate Feeders, some women (usually willingly) go through the slowest trail to exploding. By having someone feed them constantly, blowing them up to a helpless sphere until they just explode. (May be farmer’s market contests devoted to who can eat the most or who’s got the biggest wife)\

My stories – Inflation party entertainment, popping is extra. Inflation celebrities. Really, no one cares if a girls’ boyfriend inflates and pops her in front of a crowd.

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More to cum!

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Of course, I'm open to any and all questions about the world. Really helps the brainstorming!!! I'd put this in the writer's area, but technically it's more a concept than a story at this point. The stories that come from this will be posted in the stories section or my Deviantart Gallery!!!!

Delacroix

I think this should have been posted in writer's den... None the less, will be sure to give it a read, loved your previous stories.

carnatic

I'm happy to just wait and see what kind of world you come up with.

Somedude

What exactly is POP.DOS?

LimitBreaker

It was a text game I downloaded way back. You basically "play" an inflatable woman choosing what you do each "year" like practicing, competition, criminal activities, etc. Inevitably ending in popping. I found it on "Pop-In" yahoo group.

Lopni

Thanks a lot for sharing a word - I'm really grateful.

Here, please take this program recompiled for windows: http://lopni.deviantart.com/journal/Of-Popstat-Clench-and-CattyN-454454324

It's not too stable though, so if you like to tweak with the source, please feel free.

Umm...speaking of "inevitably"... may i suggest pressing "n" during inflation ^_^

Murkstorm

While I like your writing style, I do hope that you will pay attention to the sociological differences that some of these world ideas will impose on your setting. For example, the Round91 case would result in a world in which no one has ever grown up knowing their mother, requires alternate means of feeding infants (as mammalian lactation is tied to pregnancy and the mother's survival), and would place men in gender roles normally carried by women in real life.

Also, I find the last example you gave to smell of extreme misogyny. After all, every girl who pops was someone's daughter. Maybe a sister, a neice, a granddaugter. If no one cares that her boyfriend murdered her for kicks, that says volumes about how alien the society is, no matter how much it resembles ours on the surface.

 

doubleintegral
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It's fiction.

carnatic

Is that comment for real?

LimitBreaker

True. By default- the popping aspect of inflation can be seen as extremely sadistic and even a snuff fetish. So, to write a world where popping common could easily be seen as a dystopian world! Of course that's not my intent, and I do plan on addressing all the social customs that would evolve from this world.

Also- I think your misogyny comment is funny. The reason I'm making it a woman only inflation world is because I don't find men sexy at all. I'm a psycho lesbian that way. But yes- the customs of this world by default will be mildly to extremely alien to real life.

 

Murkstorm

No, the misogyny comment was in reaction to this line in the original post.

"Really, no one cares if a girls’ boyfriend inflates and pops her in front of a crowd."

carnatic

That's just what turns her on, it doesn't have to have a deeper meaning.

Lopni

This is a very good question and important issue.

That's what LimitBreaker/Burster adresses in her stories 4 and 5 - and does it brilliantly.

You're right of course, this fictional world is very different from real world - and it heavily relies on magic.

LB's fictional world is breathing, and it's beautiful. We can't deny the obvious, can we? ^_^

LimitBreaker

Been a while, but I've gotten back to writing my world!!!

Still as sick and twisted as before. Probably more. Working through the details. Here's what I got so far. Actually quite a while ago.

 

Bursting World


Biology:
Sexual Dimorphism: Men and women appear as they do in our world. However, the major difference is that women are capable of inflation while men are not.

Inflating Bodies: The way inflation works is not yet understood by science, and is sort of an innate thing about the female body. Beginning approximately by the age of 17 or 18 women gain the ability to inflate by taking foreign substances into their body. This inflation ability can be improved with practice, and the largest known sizes have rivalled buildings or mountains. However, should the stress limit be reached and surpassed, the woman will naturally pop, which is a fatal result.

Inflation Entrance: In recent years, inflation through the vagina or ass has become very common. But inflation through the mouth, nipples, and bellybutton are all very viable. In fact- provided there is a seal, a needle could be inserted into almost any body part and inflation caused that way. Though inflation through the erogenous zones feels best.

Controlled Inflation: Certain parts of the body can be inflated alone if the proper set up is used. Inflation through the butt inflates the buttocks first and if a corset is worn and the thighs tightly wrapped only the butt will inflate. Inflation through the nipples can receive a similar effect with the breasts.

Internal Body: During the inflation process, for reasons also not understood, the organs and skeletal system slowly disappear until they seem to have completely disappeared from the woman’s body. A woman inflated to her limit can reach a transparency despite this being logically impossible. During deflation, these organs and bones just reappear.

Reproduction: Humans reproduce a peculiar way. Fertility is extremely low and pregnancies are rare even for individuals that have sex extremely frequently and without protection. However, once a woman does get pregnant she has an extreme number of them. Pregnancy inevitably ends with the woman’s bursting and often produces dozens minimal to hundreds of children. Over the course of approximately two years the woman blows up to her maximum size and explodes. This occurs even in women who professionally inflate and can reach sizes larger than buildings. Due to the two year gestation period, children are born capable of crawling, eating solid foods, and quickly learn to walk. Women in the presence of a pregnant woman absorb extra pheromones that cause them to lactate as well. It is also important to note- the birth rate is close to 1-20 in terms of boy to girl ratios. For the sake of getting it out of the way. Incest does not cause the biological problems it does in our world. Still considered very squicky, wrong, or even sin in many societies.

Blueberry Allergy: Blueberries and a handful of related fruits have an interesting relation with the female biological system. Eating too many results in the consumer turning into a blueberry inflating and popping. However, some women inflate and explode upon eating a single blueberry. As a result- blueberry products are rare and usually only eaten by men and children under inflation age.

Spontaneous Inflation: It is rare, but it does occur. Sometimes, a woman just randomly begins to inflate. It is a slower process than standard inflation. The woman slowly fills up with a liquid resembling water regardless of what she eats or drinks or how much. Over the course of years depending on how stretchy she is, she’ll inflate until she explodes.

Pleasure: Inflation naturally feels good. For reasons unknown, as the nervous system largely disappears, inflating women experience intense sexual pleasure as they inflate. The larger and tighter they are the more intense the sexual feelings. Even at the popping, stretching, or other straining points are more akin to an intense stretch than overt pain. An aching feeling is the worst that comes with inflation, and that’s alongside the pleasurable feelings.

Conclusion: All in all, inflation is an accepted reality of human nature, though its evolutionary origins, its purpose, causes, anomalies, and the rest are complete scientific mysteries. Theories abound, but no study has proven any concrete theory yet.



Sociology:
Overview: Women’s innate ability to inflate and the likelihood of popping has greatly shaped all human societies. For the most part, women are both more important and less important to society than men. Being in greater number means more women take on most of society’s roles, nearly all aspects of society is run by women. However, how common popping is has also led to there being little fuss being made over a woman’s bursting. So, the constantly shifting high women population has led to vastly different societies from our own.

Family: By default, the normal family unit is unusual. A woman inflates with children until she explodes giving birth to them. Due to the rarity of pregnancies and the amount of children born this means that the children are raised by the entire community rather than the father or a single couple. This is aided by the longer gestation period so the children are more capable of not being dependent on breast milk to eat. The common bursting of adult women means that most children will go through multiple mothers until their maturity. This is not seen as unusual and being life, children are used to being raised by a community rather than a single person.

Sexuality: Given the extreme difference in men to women ratios, many women practice homosexual acts or masturbation to satisfy themselves. Given that inflation is innately sexual, this leads to many women inflating themselves in their spare time to satisfy themselves sexually. This often leads to popping should self-control be lost or a partner is not available to ensure popping doesn’t happen.

Sexual Freedom: Due to the number of women compared to men, men are encouraged and free to have as many sexual partners as they want. In the past this meant entire villages or clans centered around a single man. Huge harems. Nowadays it more means that a man is free to have sex with anyone he wants even if he is in a committed relationship. Brothels are common, and essentially offer professional sex to men and the chance of heterosexual sex for the women working there.

Marriage: Marriage is an interesting custom that not all societies agree with. Due to the difference in length of lifespans and the likelihood the woman will pop it isn’t the same as in our world. Most marriages are more akin to agreed breeding partners. Where the couple try actively to induce pregnancy and live together to ensure this is likely to happen. There are some societies or religions however, that do practice “lifelong” marriage. This often results in the man and woman rarely having sex or only protected sex and the woman doing her best to avoid inflation as a past time. Many people see these relations as needlessly boring, traditional, or unorthodox.

Politics: Given that men have longer lifespans; men have traditionally held political power in a number of societies. Able to maintain relations and a solid plan for decades longer than the average woman who rarely reaches the age of 30 before bursting. However, in recent years democratic elections and shorter terms of political rule has introduced more women into the leadership positions and so politics is more governed by a societies ideals rather than the individuals currently in power.

Spirituality: Many religions exist across the world. Each with their own opinions on what inflation means, women’s roles, and how to live their lives. Some religions preach that inflation is a sin and that the only time a woman expands is during pregnancy. Others state that there is no shame in inflation and that popping leads to a good afterlife. Some claim that women inflating is a punishment by the gods. Many religions hold that God is female, if only reflecting the sheer amount of women in most societies. All in all, most spiritualties strive to teach people to accept passing even more so than in our world- with the frequency of bursting it has to be.

Education and Work: Due to the population being almost exclusively women, and the average life span before bursting to be 30, education works differently. Basic education is received until about the age of 10 upon which girls are encouraged to choose a life path, in which all of their studies now revolve around. These paths could be anything, from teaching to cooking to construction to biology. Education is so intense, that by the time the individual is 16 or 18 they are considered a professional.

Popping: Popping is not a big deal. Death by any other means than popping is considered to be extremely unusual and a huge deal. But a woman popping is rarely followed up by an investigation unless the individual was of particular importance or a relative insists on catching and punishing the perpetrator. The punishment for popping someone is ironically inflation to popping. The line between legal popping and illegal popping is thin. This is not aided by the fact many societies consider popping to be a normal or even honourable way to pass on. Many societies even practice the “pop of honour.” In which a woman willingly pops herself publicly after a certain stage of her life, someone she cares about, or just a holiday. An example is New Year’s celebration. Where up to dozens of women are inflated and popped at the countdown.

Competitions: An accompanying event of the Olympics are the inflation competitions. Where women push their bodies to the limit in their inflation ways. Through either size, maneuverability, or being used as weights in other events. As well, popping competitions are common worldwide both official and casual. Where inflators face off until only one of them are let in one piece.

 

 

Inspiration from Round91, Owen, Nagi, and various other one-shots I've forgotten the names of. Sorry.

 

I've also thrown up another story intended in this world. Though I think my previous ones all fit into the world as well. This new one focuses on the roulette esque situation of eating blueberries. You can find my work on my deviantart page. http://limitburster.deviantart.com/

carnatic

Good to see you again... I read and replied to this on dA :)

LimitBreaker

New story in this world! This will be the last post here in normal forums. I'll stick to my post in the Writing Sub-Forum when posting updates on my Inflation World.

But new story, Pregnant Inflation and Air Inflation to Popping.

http://fav.me/d7ny9hl