Turkish Trouble possible sequal

Dear All

As 2022 of you have read my blueberryfication story Turkish Trouble, what are your veiws on it of writing improvements as due to the high readership of it in the past 2 months i feeel that it would be worth writing a sequal to it?

any suggestions

amny thanks

Patrick

TheVaughan

I thought it was a good read would like to see a sequal maybe another girl in the mix?

Sorry I cant pick apart the story and study your writing style in depth but just do what you did last time and keep up the good work bro!

paddyalbooth

Well i do plan to have 2 girls in the next sequal might include some jucing in this one possible or maybe stick to bursting, but im glad that it has been well recived. 

 

paddyalbooth

Hello all

Just to let you know that part 2 is in production and is entitled Turkish Trouble: Double Trouble whre two girls, Ellen and Carly get sent a package while there on hoilday from a lonley friend back home containing a certain chocolate bar and they get to grips with what it can do. Due for release September/October 2014 

Im really enjoying writing this one so hopefuly that should pass over to those who read it.

thats all for now

Patrick 

paddyalbooth

Just to let you know turkish trouble two has been uploaded and should be published soon so please i would like some feed back and there are a number of possible sequals lined up if rating and views are good.

paddyalbooth

I would like to annouce that i have started work on the 3rd installment of the serise which a change in writing style which should be easier to read. 4035 people have now viewd the origonal story and 511 have read the sequal which has performed poorly but that is down to using th same writing style as the first as it does not work for rwo people. I will post samples of the 3rd to make sure i get it right. this one is heaily inspired by the works of faridea easpecally the juiceing room serise. so stay tuned.

thanks

Patrick 

LutherVKane
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Don't read too much into the sequel's performance. Turkish Trouble 2 is tagged as having expliciit sexual content, so it's only viewable by registered uers. Anonymous users can read the first story. Stories accessible to anonymous users always have much higher read counts, as most site visitors aren't registered.

paddyalbooth

Thanks Luther that means alot as you run this wonderful place, i am unsure if my writing was bad in that one as it was like some liked it some found it hard to read, but i am now ready to write again.

many thanks

Patrick 

paddyalbooth

An update 2 months on a lot of progress has been made on the first draft of the 3rd edition in the serise, i am taking my time over this one to try and rekindel the feel of the origonal. I am about 60% through so possibly at the end of summer it might be finnished and ready for release. I may take a brake to write the story treatments for the 4th edition as i do enjoy writing when i find the time. I have a 5th sequal planned also along with some standalone stories.

thanks

Patrick 

paddyalbooth

Well more months have passed but i have more news, there will be a short break from the seqwence to release the prequal to turkish trouble which is around 2 thirds done and will be soon foloowed by 4 and 5 as they are both in production which will bring us over half way though the turkish trouble saga. 

 

will keep you posted 

 

Patrick 

paddyalbooth

Wow nearly a year since i posted still working away at this writing number 4 and 5, i keep trying to post the prequal on here but it does not upload with no explanation why is luther can explain so all of them are now on deviant art to read now uni work is coming to an end some more writing will happen this summer stay tuned. 

patrick