new story i wrote today
Brandy sighed as she walked into the loft that she shared with her boyfriend Sven and her girlfriend Betty and her boyfriend John. Betty was watching the Looney tunes cartoon the Fastest with the Mostest. Betty had just finished blowing up balloons for Sven's birthday. Hey Brandy said Betty a perky model blonde and Brandy a curvey raven haired lady with hair to the middle of her back. Betty and John did role playing John had a body inflation fetish. So did Sven and he told Brandy about it and Brandy thought it was weird but sexy Sven was always trying to fatten her up but no luck. So Brandy put her purse down and went to the computer and to send some emails out and she felt like the other Brandy in lifting sprirts from a video website where the woman blew up a balloon and inhaled the helium from the balloon she blew up but only her legs and her arms rose to shoulder level. So much stress said Brandy after she sent the last email. Betty got up and opened a box of uninflated balloons and handed one to Brandy. What kind of balloons are these asked Brandy to Betty I found these at the shop I use they say discontinued. Are the still good asked Brandy.
Let's find out said Betty and Betty took one of the balloons and inflated it. The balloon grew quickly to a 5 foot round size and then handed to Brandy and then she blew up the other too the same size then Betty said if I had one wish today is to become a balloon-woman for John. Brandy said OK Betty said Brandy I wish for both of us to become blimps before the boys come home for a surprise. at the same time a fine invisible powder came off the balloons and touched the women the powder was so fine that the women did not feel a thing. Brandy forgot a email she sent and she went to the computer and sat down. and Betty went to tie the balloons up when Betty noticed Brandy began to inflate. And Betty said Brandy are you getting fatter? Brandy looked down and she noticed that her belly was swelling up and she said Betty you blowing up too and she noticed that the balloons that Betty blew up with a air pump began to swell even larger. Betty noticed that two balloons swollen up to 10 ft round.by that time Brandy could not reach the mouse of the computer and the shirt she wore began to fill out and Betty's hips flared out wide trying to catch up with her stiffing and rising sausage arms and Brandy began to lean back to her chair because of her swelling body and the chair fell out from behind her Brandy though she was going to fall but the giant balloon caught her in time and put her on her feet to join Betty. Then one of the balloons began to speak Ladies do not be afraid we wanted to reward you for the fresh air you gave us. We did not know that some women want to be balloons. When we crashed landed on this planet our computer tapped the internet and found a factory that produced balloons and helium and parts we needed to repair our ship,while searching for parts we came across several websites where women want to become balloons and our scouts sought these women but we became trapped inside the box for months and now you have reinflated us to the proper size
While you where inflating us our special dust that makes us unpoppable but expandable transferred to you but we feel you are not round enough you only received 1% of the powder please do not be afraid of what happens next. One moment later the fine powder that the women did not feel earlier covered the women head to toe. Fearful at first Betty and Brandy's fear of being inflated too pure joy and happiness. Brandy and Betty smiled as their bodies began to starfish. Brandy's shirt buttons began to fail one by one even Betty's belt failed on her tights exposing her belly button and then Brandy's shirt fell off but her pants and sports bra didn't and Brandy's bellybutton was exposed. Then the two giant balloons that grew earlier floated towards the women. The balloons rolled to where the nozzles where in perfect aliment
With their belly buttons and balloon attached to their belly buttons Betty and Brandy did not want to fight back they welcomed the balloons attachment Betty said it first fill me till I am fat and round,then Brandy I want to be a blimp too. The balloons began to inflate the women faster and faster first Betty's cheeks became rosy and plump with air her body began to engulf her legs and arms into a huge globe with only her head,hands and feel sticking out,Brandy could feel another balloon doing her hair into a ponytail as she watched to balloon attached to her bellybutton she could feel the cool air rush into gently and she could feel her body balloon further she felt her arms and legs disappear into the round balloon sphere then the balloons detached themselves from Betty and Brandy then the balloons spoke to the women we hope you enjoy your new bodies. We dusted the remaining balloons so you can inflate yourselves or other women. The balloons will work only on women. Betty was sad that the balloons that inflated her and Brandy left for home. Then she noticed Brandy was looking in the mirror she was smiling with a blissful smile
Her cheeks where full and rosy her flesh bulged so much that Brandy could barely could turn her head,she was really enjoying being round and so full. Betty waddled over and noticed how round and shiny she was. So fat and round said Brandy
Yes indeed said Betty won't the men be surprised then she heard a car pull up it was Sven and John. Won't they be surprised and Sven and John walked in and they saw their girlfriends new bodies and where turned on and they gently rolled their girlfriends into their bedrooms where many happy moments on that day. And the balloons who inflated the women did not leave earth but went around the earth finding women who wanted to be balloons
I'm sorry, but that was very hard to read. Wall of text, no punctuation and just a lot of "and then and then and then" stuff. Good effort though, keep practising.