Thanks for the critique, I never get much, so it's interesting to get an in-depth look at what someone thinks! I wish the world could be more widely accepting of our strange fetishes...
Kelly the College Blueberry
Kelly had lived a very sheltered life until she graduated from high school. Before then, her parents would force her to return home from school and complete any assigned work, then only allowing her to read classic literature or non-fictitious books and listen to classical music. They fed her a very bland variety of foods to keep her healthy but make it impossible for their precious daughter to eat too much and gain weight. Her parents weren't cruel, but they were very wealthy and wanted their only daughter to be able to inherit the money and be sensible with it. They wanted her to make a career for herself, yet also have the financial backing to create it and maintain a healthy financial situation. Then she would have a family and pass it on to her kids.
That couldn't happen if Kelly was always around boys and girls her own age who could be terrible influences on her. She might end up blowing the money on drugs and sex before she was 30! Kelly had fit herself into her parents routine by the time she was 10 years old, understanding the responsibility that she would take on in the future. While she never had the time to think about boys, and never about sex, she did feel funny when she once saw a film at school.
The class had finished reading "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" and had worked hard enough in class to warrant the teacher to show them both of the films. It was during the blueberry scenes with Violet Beauregard that Kelly first felt anything particularly thrilling, feeling confused by the sensation, but the scenes were fleeting and she had forgotten that strange feeling tshe felt watching the snarky bitch blow up into a big blueberry.
Kelly gradutated from high school at the top of her year, thanks to her parents lifestyle, and was accepted into a prestigious college to study law. The college, however, was out of state, but Kelly's parents believed it was the right time to let Kelly out into the world and prove herself worthy of her future inheritance. That was a pretty poor decision.
When the fall arrived, Kelly had moved into her room, with a room mate, Alexis. Alexis was studying science, but it was her parents who forced her into it. What Alexis wanted to do was cook and create delicious meals. When the pair first met, Alexis believed she had found her guinea pig.
"What would you like me to bake for you, Kelly?" Alexis asked on their first night together.
"Thanks, but no thanks, Alexis. I already had dinner with my parents before they left," Kelly replied, her head stuck in a book of law.
"Aw, come on! I'm dying to bake. Surely you'd like dessert?" Alexis whined.
"Dessert?" Kelly asked, who was unaware of such a meal.
Alexis was shocked, "You don't know what dessert is!? Good God, what have they been feeding you at home?"
"Whatever's necessary," Kelly simply answered.
"Well then, I'm gonna bake you your first ever desert! How does blueberry pie sound?"
The words "blueberry pie" hit Kelly like a bolt of lightning, those words eliciting a small tingle throughout her body.
"B...blue...blueberry pie?" Kelly stammered, "I guess I've always wanted to try some..."
"That's a girl! Blueberry pie's my specialty! It'll be ready in a few hours," said Alexis cheerfully.
The thought of blueberry pie made Kelly remember the selfish Violet, made her remember that big body she had. Kelly shivered in excitement at the idea of being a blueberry the size of a house! Maybe it really could happen!
After a few hours of baking, cooling and studying, the pie was ready. Alexis divided the pie into halves, one for each girl.
"Here you go, Kelly! Afraid we don't have any ice-cream or anything to go with it," Alexis mentioned, handing half the pie over.
Kelly thanked Alexis, then smelt the warm, homely scent of the pie. It made her mouth water, until Kelly couldn't help but cut of a big piece of the pie and stuffed it into her mouth. Tasting sugar and pastry for the first time hit Kelly like a tidal wave, sending vibrations of pleasure throughout her body. Her brain was frazzled with the sugar rush it had never experienced before and made Kelly lose herself in the pie.
Alexis was more conservative when it came to eating, but Kelly shovelled the pie down into her belly like she hadn't eaten for a week!
"Boy, you sure can eat," said Alexis, knowing she had found her guinea pig.
Kelly rubbed her gut, which was full of the pie, which still radiated a warmth through her that she had never felt before.
"Thank you very much, Alexis! I look forward to your next creation!" Kelly said excitedly, before going to bed.
That night, Kelly twisted and turned in her bed, still feeling full from the pie, thinking about Violet Beuregard and dreaming of eating so much blueberry pie that she blew up into a fat blueberrry! It was that night that Kelly had her first ever orgasm, which had been building over so many years. Her orgasm was so big that she had virtually wet the bed, and she needed to change her sheets.
Kelly always remembered that night as the night she had made her choice.
Kelly's parents were paying for her share of the room as well as sending money for Kelly to buy her healthy and nutritious food. Of course, Kelly could still only think of big blueberries, to the point she imagined what other girls in her lectures would look like as one. And because she could only think of being a blueberry, she only ever wanted to eat blueberry pie! It started off as just her nightly dessert, then it also became her dinner until she ate nothing but blueberry pie for breakfast lunch and dinner!
While she didn't turn blue, Kelly sure was beginning to grow. Her body had a great metabolism at first, but years of conditioning were undone by weeks and weeks of nothing but pie, and the pounds were starting to pile on! Her breasts started to get rounder, filling out her bras and shirts more and more; her ass was getting blubbery, and started making putting on her jeans a daily struggle, but her belly was leading the pack. It had grown soft and doughy, and being stuffed into her pants gave her a sexy muffintop, which some guys, and a few girls, had trouble looking away from. But even this amount of growth still wasn't enough for Kelly, who still wanted to be bigger, fuller and, not to mention, bluer.
As she got fatter with every slice of delicious pie, Kelly had to start spending some of her pie money on bigger clothes, which she got in a shade of violety-blue. As her waistline expanded, she started to look more like blueberry as her body stretched out and against her bigger clothes. Kelly even started to wear blue eyeliner, blue lipstick, heck, she even dyed her blonde hair blue! With all this sexual tension building up with her weight, Kelly had bought the Wonka films and rubbed herself off to that infamous scene, the one that had ruined/bettered her life, depending on your point of view.
Eventually, most people at the college had picked up on what Kelly was doing to herself, with some of the blueberry fetishists managing to ask her out. Kelly always said yes, only ever thinking of how much more pie she could stuff into herself, and was much happier blowing herself up with more and more pie while some guy or girl fucked her hard!
After a few months had passed, Kelly was starting to have some troubles. Her insatiable addiction had caused her to start skipping lectures and missing assignments so she could keep eating and fucking, waiting for the moment she would finally become a big blueberry. Kelly's weight had also reached 400 pounds, which was impossible for any normal person to achieve, but Kelly wasn't normal. The extra weight made it hard for Kelly to leave the dormitory room, and now Alexis was starting to worry, although this gave her plenty of time to perfect her blueberry pie.
Alexis believed that if Kelly finally achieved her desire to become such a monstrous fruit, she would somehow return to a more normal lifestyle, and she wouldn't keep finding strangers' underwear around the dormitory. Kelly had spent several of the past few months devising a powder that would make the juice of a blueberry continue to replicate in a reaction with the enzymes in the human mouth. Alexis knew that it was blueberry juice that filled Violet to brink of popping, and that stuffing your belly with blueberry pie wouldn't do shit, except make you huge in another way. But this replicating juice would provide enough to fill Kelly like it did Violet, and Kelly would finally move past this mad desire of hers.
Alexis finally finished the powder, and had finished adding it to a cooling pie, which was ripe for Kelly to consume.
"Oh, Kelly!" Alexis cried out, putting her plan in action.
"Mmmmm... Uuurrrp!" Kelly burped, "Yes, Alexis."
Kelly had gotten so fat and lazy, she could do little more than moan and groan her words.
"I've got a pie for you!!" Alexis announced, "But you have to do something for me first."
Kelly tried to roll her eyes, but gave up, "Whaaaat?"
"I want you to come with me to the college gym," Alexis said sweetly.
"Gym?" Kelly had no desire to lose her fat, orgasmic body, but desired one of Alexis' pies more, which tasted better and fatter than any of the others she had tried.
Kelly gave in, "Okay, but I need your help."
Alexis virtually rolled Kelly to the college gym, just like she were a big blueberry. She certainly looked like one, in her royal blue jumpsuit. It was like a second skin around her blubbery, jiggling body, and it looked ready to bust off if she grew any bigger.
"Here we are," Alexis said, rolling Kelly through the double doors. Kelly barely fit through them, she was that wide!
"Hiccup... Uuuuurrrrrpppp!" Kelly's stomach was disturbed at the way it moved, but Kelly was in too great a state of bliss to care.
"We're here... Now... Give... Me... The... PIE!!" Kelly demanded, starting to feel her pussy getting wet with desire.
Moving over to the shelf where she left the pie to cool, Alexis soon returned with a normal looking blueberry pie, but the top crust was dusted with a blue, sugary powder.
"What's... the... powder?" Kelly asked, between breaths.
"Something to help you enjoy the pie more! I know blue's your favourite!" Alexis exclaimed, leaving Kelly to enjoy her just desserts.
"Mmmmmmmm... Finally!" Kelly shouted as she began to shovel the entire pie into her fattened face, getting blueberries all over it. It took a few mere minutes for Kelly to swallow the last of the pie, and Kelly could feel that familiar, fattening warmth radiate from the pie in her overstuffed gut. But though she had swallowed the pie, she was still swallowing down something else. It was some sort of liquid, a liquid that made her feel as warm and as sexy as the pie had made her.
It didn't take long before Kelly could see what she always wanted to see: Her hands were turning BLUE!!
"I did it! I did it! I'm turning into a big, fat BLUEBERRY!!!" Kelly shouted in excitement and happiness, feeling fuller as she kept swallowing. The rest of Kelly's skin also turned that sexy shade of violety-blue, and now the juice was really starting to take effect.
Kelly's overstuffed gut began to swell, growing so big that her fat rolls of blubber started to stretch out as she filled with juice! Her cellulite covered ass also began to stretch out as it filled with juice, causing Kelly to start tilting forwards as her ass continued to inflate! Her tits started to fill with juice, Kelly rubbing and squeezing her big, blue nipples until she began to lactate juicy goodness! Kelly could only imagine how much bigger she was going to get, her jumpsuit getting tighter and tighter, the seams ready to burst!
Alexis was watching her room mate from a distance, waiting for the right time to juice Kelly before she was too full and ripe, before she was ready to pop! Alexis was amazed as she watched her powder be put to the test, and it was certainly succeeding.
RRRRIIIIIIIIIPPPPP!!!!
Kelly's jumpsuit could no longer stand the strain, and exploded off her round, ripe blueberry body, leaving her big, blue and naked. But Kelly couldn't care less about her potential embarrassment, she could feel her tight pussy be stretched out between her legs, which were being consumed by her gigantic belly. Soon enough, Kelly's arms and legs were completely consumed by her body. Her ass and her belly had turned her body into a gigantic sphere, with her tits still growing and causing her to roll forwards.
Even though Kelly had grown so large, bigger than Violet could ever grow, she still couldn't stop swallowing the replicating juice!
"AAAAAHHHHHH!!!! OOOOOOHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! MMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!" Kelly moaned and groaned as she felt more juice make her body more full! Her pussy was still being stretched, and blueberry juice began to leak out, making a hell of a mess.
Her big, blueberry body felt too good, Kelly never wanted to stop growing! She still hadn't cum, and she could still swallow more and more juice!
Alexis was getting very scared now! Kelly had grown much bigger, much wider than the juicing contraption she had designed for her, and now it was too late for Kelly to be juiced. Either the juice would stop replicating, or Kelly would go kaboom! Alexis saw Kelly's blueberry blimp of a body start to turn very, very purple in colour, indicating that Kelly's body was turning red from all the pressure the juice was placing on her. Alexis tried one last gamble!
"Kelly, please! You've got to stop swallowing!" Alexis pleaded.
"Why? It's... too... GULP... fucking... good... GULP!!" Kelly shouted between gulps of juice.
"You're getting to big! You'll pop!"
"I... can... GULP... GULP... take... it!"
Alexis wasn't taking anymore chances, and she ran like lightning away from the college gym, feeling terrible for making this happen. She just wanted it to end! And now, Kelly's greedy, gluttonous addiction to blueberries was over!
Kelly couldn't stop drinking in the gallons and gallons of juice that kept flowing into her throat, filling her big blimp body up more and more, making her bigger and bigger! Her pussy couldn't stretch anymore, and at long last, the big sexy, greedy blueberry had one last gigantic orgasm, blasting out a torrent of blueberry juice from her pussy!
Unfortunately, even that orgasm wasn't big enough to satisfy Kelly, there was no satiating her, in either her greed or her sex drive! Kelly just kept drinking mouthful after mouthful of delectable juice, feeling more and more of it blast out of her lactating boobs, feeling her body grow tighter and tighter! But now Kelly had gone too far!
All this replicating blueberry juice had run out of room! Kelly's gulps started to become fewer, and her cheeks started to fill up, the juice having no where left to go! But still, Kelly could only think of being as big and as round and as full as anyone could ever be, and soon enough...
SSSSSSPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kelly's big, blue, blimp of a blueberry body finally hit its limit and ruptured, making Kelly explode all withing the heavy fortifications of the college gym! Her body was plastered all over the walls, and juice flooded the college's sewer system.
Alexis couldn't believe what happened, admitting her part in all of it and departing the college to get away from the memories. Other students, however, managed to get their hands on the gym's security footage, which showed fat Kelly blow up into fat, orgasming blueberry Kelly and then into blueberry juice on the walls. The fetishists all paid a fortune for it, and it was worth Kelly's weight in gold!
One thing that's interesting about this story is how much it plunges headlong into desires without any regrets; the main character wants it, and so do these blueberry fetishists that just seem to be... there, I guess. They don't have much influence on the story, but all these details establish a sort-of fetish-focused alternate-world, where it's okay to let loose, get huge, and quench sexual thirsts. I don't really have any problems with it, though. The plot pacing and the inflation sequence is quick yet steady. The narration and the dialogue, which, while a little stiff and overenthusiastic at times, seems to embrace this unchangeable lust I mentioned. It's a little messy and... not so pretty, I suppose, with a 400 pound inflatee who in reality can't attend classes at all, but this is what makes this story so undeniably pure about its message. To throw every character motivation to one end, to only get as big as humanly possible, is a theme that's simple and yet carried out so directly. To me, it feels refreshing, like the story did its job and didn't try to show off doing it.
...Something like that. I just love how open this story is about size and sex.
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