Small Girl Gets Huge

Inflation Types:
Popping:
Sexual Content:
Date Written: 
04/18/2017

Alexis was an adorable and innocent 18 year old girl. She was a slim, gorgeous, and outrageously sexy teen with blue eyes and short black hair. This is the story of a tragic incident, but something that just happened to some girls like her.

On the way home from her 12th grade class, Alexis stumbled into a flyer asking for people to try a new dieting method. Being the kind of girl who loves her figure to be perfect, she immediately drove to the address and walked into the building as it said to do on the flyer.

Inside the building was a woman in a lab coat, a large tank (air, maybe?), and a chair with straps on it.

"Hello... I'm here for the.. Diet.." Alexis whimpered, uneasy about the strange setup.

"Hi, darling. Take a seat in the chair so we can get started."

"I don't know about this.." Alexis whined, reaching for the door to escape, "I think I changed my mind"

"You're ours now. The door is locked.. Just sit in the chair and I promise you won't be sorry." The lady told.

"Fine.. I guess I'll give it a try if you say so."

Alexis sat in the chair, and the woman strapped her in firmly so she couldn't escape. She reached for the mysterious tank and attached the nozzle onto Alexis' back.

"Ouch! What is this even for?!" Alexis cried.

"Oh it.. Erm.. Removes any excessive body fat you have. You're a pretty thin little girl though.. So you shouldn't have to worry," The woman told her, "Now I have to go get the equipment started. Have fun, cutie."


The woman took a step back and walked into another room, closing and locking a door behind her. It was just Alexis now, all alone in this room that was slightly lightened by the sunlight outside.

The tank was now activated and was purring a soft sound.

"What's going on?? Miss... Please come back - I'm afraid.." Alexis whimpered. Her stomach grumbled and she let out a small belch, "What's happening? What are you doing to me?"

Her pants started to feel tight and she looked down and saw that her belly had began to grow. She moaned and tried to reach her [tied down] arm to shut of the tank valve.

"No! This is all wrong.. You said this would make me smaller, not bigger!" She fussed. Her belt buckle popped and her pants ripped down the middle as her belly began to grow more and more. "Please stop it! I don't want to be fat! Help me please.."

Her belly grew even more. She could now see her belly button peeking out from her shirt. She belched again, putting her hands on her round and chubby tummy. She whimpered and groaned from the pressure from her expanding stomach.
"It's too much.. Please stop it.... I feel so gross! I feel like I'm pregnant!" Alexis cried. Her belly was so huge it covered her legs and ripped her pants some more. The chair started to crack because of all the weight.. Poor Alexis was so fat she broke the entire chair.

She fell on the floor and grunted when her huge body bounced against the concrete.

"Please help me.. " she cried, "I'm so fat.." Her legs started to separate and her arms couldn't even reach down anymore. She was pinned down; spread out from her massive size.

"Oh God.. I feel like I'm going to burst.... PLEASE stop this!!!! Why are you doing this to me?? It hurts! I'm HUGE!" Alexis moaned some more. Her stomach felt so tight... She was about to explode any second. She was so big around.. Her skin was tearing at the seams.

"Oh my goodness... I think I'm gonna... No! Please stop...... I'm gonna... "


*Pop!*

Alexis burst all of her flesh all over the room. She was so young and beautiful.. Full of so much potential.. But she was conned into one of the worst things a thin girl can do. So much for her figure... Now Alexis is just a big mess from a huge explosion.

Author's Note: 

This is my first story,  and I hope everyone enjoys it.  Please feel free to give feedback :)

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Average: 2.4 (13 votes)
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hfilled
Criticism,not an insult

You suggest she's filling with air but soon afterwards mention the chair braking under her weight.  The vic is twice described as slim, even the inflator says so, yet (to the reader) there's no real reason for her to try a 'diet' technique...this piece had some potential (applying it to a chubby girl, maybe?) but the casual overinflation of a slim gal did nothing for me, especially given the discrepancies between how she's portrayed.  Lack of attention to detail really sank this for me.  Sorry.  Now if a stick-like women =was trying for a bigger figure or a chubby gal tried this 'diet' only to discover that she was having her fat turned into a gas (maybe making her weigh less?), then it might have worked.

That Grumpy Writer
It's A Good Outline For A Story

Please, please, please take your time when writing. What this feels like is more of an idea for a story, not a story in itself. It lacks detail beyond the bare necessities, and people want more than that. They want detail, not just the A to B of it. Besides that, when it's rushed like this, there are tons of logical issues. For one, why does the girl who's fit and sexy want to be skinnier? Why does the researcher not even give a waiver for the girl to sign so they can avoid lawsuits? Nothing makes sense, because no information was given. You might say, "Why does that matter? People are here for the inflation." It's because logical issues are distracting. It takes the reader's attention away from the details, the inflation, and the characters, and breaks their suspension of disbelief. You don't want the reader to be distracted, you want them to be fully engrossed.

Please don't think anything of criticisms beyond us only wanting to help. It's your first story, so don't think it says anything about you as a writer. "Wow, I didn't write a 5/5 on my very first try? I must suck!" Of course. Everyone sucks writing their first story. Most people suck at their 100th story. I really hope you continue writing, and hope that you give story number 2 all you got, no holds barred.

hfilled
Exactly. What s/he said. For

Exactly. What s/he said. For a good example of my(less than perfect) first story, look here http://bodyinflation.org/node/4300