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clovis
A Script Slighty Used

Over at Taylormadeclips there's a new release called, "You Should Never Have Told My Secret."

Here's the preview: http://www.taylormadeclips.com/vids/pv_lolita-houseBB_w.mp4

It is based on an idea I had submitted.  Taylor had asked for a fuller script which I sent, but doesn't seem to have been used.  I thought it might make for a fun read so I'm including it here with a few comments/questions below:

The whole video takes place in a hallway. Shooting is mostly POV style with no need for a second voice- all dialogue is for the actress only. While this video would use the large blueberry suit this is not meant to be a blueberry clip, so no makeup, cheeks, etc. are needed. The tone, while somewhat dramatic, should still be kept fun.

The actress (the smaller the better) is wearing the (deflated) blue outfit complete with jacket and belt while sitting on the floor in the middle of a hallway looking weepy- clearly fresh from an argument.

"I can't believe you called me a freak! I've never told anyone about my... ability- of all people, I thought I could trust you.”

She gets up and wipes her teary eyes as she composes herself.

“Was I not more than accepting when you showed me your collection of disgusting anime porn? But the way you reacted… and I didn't even get that big. You asked why I wore this ridiculously over-sized dress tonight, well, I was prepared to give you quite the show.”

She puts her arms out and touches the walls on either side of the hallway. Running her fingers over the walls, her face shows that she is contemplating something. She looks to her right, then to her left as her frown turns into a wicked smile.

“But now I’m thinking, like it or not, you’re still going to see something tonight. Something really- really big.”

With a look of concentration, she takes in several deep breaths as she clenches her fists, a look of great exertion on her face as suddenly she begins to inflate.

“Yes, look at me. Watch me grow.”

She continues to breath deep and push herself out and expand. She’s clearly loving this and she runs her hands all over her swelling body.

“Is this really so awful? You liked me before, now there’s just more to love.”

She takes in another deep breath and pushes out again.

“And more…”

“And more…”

Bigger and bigger she swells. The POV moves to try and get past her, but she's already too big to get around. A hand reaches out (can be male or female, I’ve written it so no gender is specified.) The hand pushes against her plump body, but it simply sinks in deep and she doesn’t budge.

“No, no, no. You shall not pass. Sound familiar? That’s because I’m a wizard- well, a witch, but you get the idea. And I’m a powerful one. Which means I can get as big as I want.”

Again she huffs and huffs, growing bigger and bigger.

“And thanks to you…”

Huff huff- grow grow.

“I want…”

“to be…”

“HUGE!!!”

A more rapid swelling (possibly speed up the footage for effect.) Again a hand is seen pressing against her, but to no effect.

“By all means, keep trying. I love feeling your tiny hands against my big swollen body. But there's no escape now."

Bigger she grows until her body spans the hallway.

"Look at your little girlfriend now- could you ever have imagined I’d fill your entire hallway!"

Bigger she grows until the belt pops off.

“Whoo hoo! You see- nothing can hold me back. I’m becoming the biggest, most wonderful woman in the world!”

She pushes herself out even bigger.

"And this is nothing compared to how big I can really get. Wanna see?"

The camera shakes no, but she only laughs and grows even more.

"TOO BAD!"

The hand reaches out again, but instead of a push, it gives her body a curious caress.

“Oh! It’s nice isn’t it. So big. You have no idea how good this feels.”

Her face is in ecstasy. Quick shots of her fingers massaging her body and her half-buried toes clenching.

“This big beautiful body could have been yours to explore, but you had to ruin it didn’t you?”

She fills until the buttons on her jacket pop and the camera backs away.

"Careful there- wouldn't want you to lose an eye."

Bigger, tighter she swells.

"But you're going to lose a whole lot more I think."

Pictures fall off the wall and bounce off her round body. We hear ominous cracking sounds, and crumbling dust rains down on her (you can sprinkle her with flour or sugar-whatever you have on hand.) Her hands are mashed up against the walls, her head approaches the ceiling (this could be done earlier with the suit only partially inflated- put her up on a chair and have her slowly rise. Pull tight the bottom of the dress so the part below her head swells as that’s all we’d need to see for the shot.)

"You broke my heart- well I'm going to break your walls.”

More cracking and rumbling sounds- shake the camera for effect. Her head makes contact with the ceiling and presses against it.  Something as simple as cereal flakes could be poured over her body to simulate crumbling debris.

“Yes- YES! Bigger! Bigger! BIGGER! I’M NOT GOING TO STOP UNTIL I BUST DOWN YOUR ENTIRE HOUSE!"

Quick shots of the fully rounded suit going in all directions until everything goes dark and we hear sounds of the whole house collapsing amidst her laughter.

-end

So, even if you've seen the preview, you'll see this ended up being a blueberry video.  While I like the size and shape of a blueberry expansion, I myself don't care for the turning blue (especially when done with caked on makeup) spitting up juice, swelling cheeks.  I don't begrudge anyone who likes those aspects, but for me it's a bit of a turnoff.  I also don't care for bursting, and in the case of this script I feel having her burst turns things completely around- she was meant to be triumphant, and now dies leaving quite the mess.

Anyway, I'm also putting this out there as a bit of an advertisement.  I produce my own works, but it's very time consuming.  This was quick, and though the end result wasn't quite what I hoped, still satisfying.  I would love to collaborate more.  If you are a content creator and a script like this interests you, please feel free to ask.




CobaltSnake
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The preview didn't look half bad, either. Until she just magically appeared in that violet outfit.

I think I've had too much...

clovis

Yeah, there's no explanation for that.  But I will say, the first stage expansion in regular clothes looks great.  I'm happy they used the suit in hallway idea, but it never really looked tight within that space like I hoped it would.

CobaltSnake
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Eh, TaylorMadeClips' stuff always seemed really phoney. I could never believe it was the person inflating, just the suit. I wish they had more of a budget so that they could actually make an inflation video without the same suit every time.

I think I've had too much...

Margeret Moonlught
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Hey, That's pretty good. 

Its a real shame Taylormadeclips still kinda suck.

BI.org’s very own metamorphic incomprehensible memetic fractal entity 

firnov
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First of all, i really like the consept for your story/clip. A woman who inflates by inhaling is intresting, because she is pushing her own limits. Also the idea of using inflation to distroy a house is (for me) really new. 

 

I understand that you are a bit dissepointed. But as a company, i have an idea why tmc use some of the older and own idea.

Tmc is based on playing in our wildest fantasies, but also of making money. So if they can urn a lit of money of stuff they did in a older clip, they do it to the next and next till it dont sell anymore. 

I think they use the blueberry inflation because of the suit. If they use the suit for a normal body inflation some people still think about blueberries because the clips before.

To be honnest, i think you can make new scripts for inflation clips. It seems you have some fun and new ideas people really like to explore!

And boom goes the inflatee

clovis

This isn't something I commissioned so Taylor was more than free to do with it as she wished. 

I'm not sure which is actually more prevalent, but I think of Blueberry as a niche within body expansion.  Now they're doing clips with spitting up juice and latex cheeks which I see as a niche within a niche that is already awfully niche.  Again, I'm not dismissing anyone who likes those aspects, and I'm sure Taylor knows much better than me what sells.  Maybe I'm alone in this, but I'm dissapointed that the only clips they've done that go to that size also have to involve the blue makeup and whatever else goes along with that. 

Fairia
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I've actually had ideas of my own for potential scripts I could share at TMC. But I barely do any writing these days yet that doesn't shut down the potential of doing it again. I just don't know how to approach them with a script though.

clovis

Actually I don't think they really want fleshed out scripts.  I've given and few and seen some others posted and they rarely stick to it.  There's many reasons for this including the abilities of the actress, the time they have to pull it off, and changes they themselves deem appropriate.

I think what they really want are scenarios with a few choice bits of dialogue.  If you can write that out, then post it on their forums or message Taylor directly.

clovis

Not taking my own advice, I did write and submit another script.  Maybe it's because they're mostly dialogue, but I seem to be able to crank out a script incredibly quick in comparison to my more polished writings.  Not expecting this to ever see the light of day, so here it is:


FILLING THE POSITION


Breast Expansion.  Ass Growth.  Blueberry (please no prosthetics or spitting up juice)

We start with THE EXECUTIVE who is dressed in business attire (preferable blue) leaning against her desk.  The desk should be arranged so that it sits in a corner (for reasons that will become clear later.)  On the desk is a stack of applications and a basket of blueberries.  THE EXECUTIVE speaks to the camera as if addressing a group.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Okay, welcome everyone.  Now this is just the first part of…

THE EXECUTIVE is interrupted by a late arrival, THE APPLICANT who isn’t really dressed for a job interview, her clothes are baggy and her hair is messy.  She has the large blue button-down jacket of the blueberry suit slung over her shoulder.

THE APPLICANT:  Hey, um… is this the place for the ah… job?

THE EXECUTIVE (annoyed):  Yes, but you’re late and we’re already…

THE APPLICANT (oblivious):  Great!

THE APPLICANT grabs an application off the desk and rather noisily takes her place at one of the student desks, hanging the large blue jacket over that seat-back.  THE EXECUTIVE rolls her eyes but continues.

THE EXECUTIVE:  As I was saying.  This is just the first part of our interviewing process.  A standard application and questionnaire to see if you’ve got the stuff to work here at Blue’s Berry Confectionary.  As spokesmodel you should strive to embody all we represent.  Which…

THE EXECUTIVE pauses to pick up the basket of blueberries and displays them proudly before the room

THE EXECUTIVE (continued): is this.  

THE EXECUTIVE pops a blueberry in her mouth, savoring the taste.

THE EXECUTIVE (continued):  When finished, please leave your papers on my desk and you’re free to go.  Expect to here from us within the week if you’re chosen to advance to the next step.  Good luck everyone.

We then have a quick montage showing shots of the time on a wall clock, shots of THE EXECUTIVE being handed back the applications while thanking them for their time, and shots of the door being closed.

THE EXECUTIVE is flipping though the applications.  She is quietly mumbling to herself as she makes red marks on each completed application.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Too short.  Too fat.  Too old.  Too… ugh- think this was the one with the acne.

We see THE APPLICANT is the only one remaining.  She gets up with application in hand, but leaves the blue jacket on her chair.  She proudly slaps her application down on THE EXECUTIVE’s desk.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Oh you… the tardy one.  Didn’t notice you were still here.  

THE APPLICANT:  Well, I hope to be here all the time soon enough.

THE EXECUTIVE (dripping with sarcasm):  Riiiiiight… Good luck with that.

THE APPLICANT (with all sincerity):  Thanks!  

THE EXECUTIVE rolls her eyes again as THE APPLICANT grabs the basket of blueberries off her desk and returns to her seat.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Hey, what are you doing?  You can leave.

THE APPLICANT:  No need.  I’m your girl.

THE EXECUTIVE shakes her head in disbelief.  She grabs up the girl’s application and we see that it hasn’t even been filled out.  

THE EXECUTIVE:  You didn’t write anything!

THE APPLICANT:  We can save the formalities for later.  Don’t worry, I’m the girl for the job.  But unfortunately I can’t prove that by filling out your silly forms.
 
THE EXECUTIVE: You’re right.  The applications are bullshit.  But I hate to break it to you sweetie, what we’re really after is a certain look.  Now, you’ve got kind of a cute, girl next door vibe going on, but we’re looking for someone with a bit more…

THE EXECUTIVE runs her hands up and down her own frame.

THE EXECUTIVE (continued): Ooomph.

THE APPLICANT (undeterred): Well, as luck would have it, there is something else I can fill out to make you understand.

THE APPLICANT grabs a handful of blueberries.  Holding them up she smells them and seems enraptured by the scent.  She grins widely before shoving them all into her mouth.  Between chews she explains.

THE APPLICANT:  Mmmm… I have… let’s call it a unique allergy.  

THE APPLICANT grabs some more blueberries and greedily gobbles them up.  She licks the juice off her lips as her attention moves downward.  

THE APPLICANT:  Oooooh… I can feel it.  It’s starting.

THE APPLICANT begins to grow within the confines of her chair.  First her ass begins to swell, then her breasts.  She slowly runs her hands over her expanding features.

THE APPLICANT:  Now, I know I might not look like much, but I promise you need look no further.  

THE APPLICANT clutches her blossoming bosom, biting her lip in bliss as she does so.  She catches the eye of THE EXECUTIVE who is watching in disbelief.  THE APPLICANT gives herself another squeeze while maintaining eye contact and giving a coy smile and a wink.

THE APPLICANT:  But feel free to look all you want.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Oh my God!  What are you… how are you…

THE APPLICANT grows and fills the tight boundaries of the desk.  She continues caressing herself with one hand, while popping individual blueberries into her mouth as she continues.

THE APPLICANT:  Now some girls may say that they like blueberries.  Some might say they love them.  But what are they talking about really?  The taste?  The intoxicating smell?  The little pop in your mouth as you bite down on them?  The are so juicy.  So round.  Yum.  But I’m the only girl that can be all of those things and more.  Much… much more.

Under the immense stress, THE APPLICANT’s chair suddenly breaks apart (unscrew the top and side so they can fall away from her.)  Blueberries scatter across the floor.  THE APPLICANT rises, showing off her hyper-voluptuous new body to the disbelieving EXECUTIVE.

THE APPLICANT (proudly):  How’s that for ooomph?

THE EXECUTIVE:  Good lord.

THE APPLICANT continues rubbing her hands over her immense and still growing curves.  Tears begin to appear in the fabric of her straining clothes.

THE APPLICANT (intercut with more tearing fabric):  I know right!  This may be more than you were looking for, but it’s not what I meant by filling out.  I’m not nearly ripe yet.  Just you wait.  

THE APPLICANT pick us her blue jacket and puts it on, struggling to button it up.

THE APPLICANT: Don’t want to get too indecent- we only just met after all.

THE APPLICANT’s whole body begins to round out.  THE APPLICANT reaches down and gives herself a playful poke.

THE APPLICANT:  Now we’re getting somewhere.

As she swells, THE APPLICANT begins moving towards THE EXECUTIVE.  THE EXECUTIVE flees behind her desk for protection as THE APPLICANT follows and positions herself in front of the desk.

THE EXECUTIVE:  What are you doing?  Stay away from me you freak!

THE APPLICANT (pouting):  Freak?  How can you say that?  You are the blueberry queen are  you not?  Well, I’m the very embodiment of your whole entrepreneurial endeavor.  I thought I’d be the very picture of perfection in your eyes.  But maybe you need to see more to be convinced.

THE APPLICANT doesn’t move, but her still growing body pushes itself against THE EXECUTIVE'S desk.  As bigger and bigger she grows the desk begins to move backwards in loud screeching jerks until THE EXECUTIVE is pinned into the corner.  In an effort to escape, THE EXECUTIVE climbs onto the desk.  There, THE EXECUTIVE pauses.  Intrigued, THE EXECUTIVE reaches out and places a curious hand on THE APPLICANT’S immensely swollen body.  The cautious touch quickly becomes an appreciative rub before devolving into a full two-handed examination.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Oh… oh wow.  You’re so big.  And juicy.  And…

THE EXECUTIVE leans in and smells THE APPLICANT.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Goodness!  You smell… delicious.  

THE APPLICANT (amateurishly seductive):  You’re welcome to try a taste.

Though it’s awkward, THE EXECUTIVE leans in further and they kiss.  From behind the desk we see both of THE EXECUTIVE’s shoes fall off as her toes curl in aroused bliss.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Mmmmm… you are amazing.

THE APPLICANT:  Told you I was the girl for the job.

THE EXECUTIVE sits back on the desk and taps a finger against her chin in thought.

THE EXECUTIVE:  Hmmm…

THE APPLICANT (confused):  What?

THE EXECUTIVE:  Well, it’s just that our blueberries are the biggest, ripest, juiciest in the whole world.  

THE APPLICANT’s growth has stopped.  She’s filled out the still buttoned blue jacket, but she hasn’t maxed out yet.  

THE APPLICANT (heartbroken):  You’re really not impressed?  I… I think I’ve stopped growing.  To be honest I’ve never been this big before.

THE EXECUTIVE smiles as she reaches down and grabs some blueberries off the floor.

THE EXECUTIVE: Maybe I need just a bit more convincing.  

One by one THE EXECUTIVE feeds the blueberries to THE APPLICANT who accepts them eagerly and soon she begins to grow again.

THE APPLICANT:  I’ll show you big.
THE APPLICANT:  I’ll show you ripe.
THE APPLICANT:  I’lll show you juicyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

THE APPLICANT strains on this last word, clearly now under immense pressure.  The buttons on the jacket look ready to blow.  THE APPLICANT’s eyes shut tight and we see that she is finally turning blue.  The color runs down her fingers and up her face and into her hair.  Once her transformation is complete she lets out a loud orgasmic scream as POP!  POP!  POP! the jacket bursts open and THE EXECUTIVE squeals in delight.

THE APPLICANT:  YESSSSS!!!!   That was INCREDIBLE!  Look at me, I am HUGE!  And… BLUE!  Holy crap I’m actually blue- this… this has never happened before.  

Still atop the desk THE EXECUTIVE slides up to THE APPLICANT, straddling her big blue body with her long legs.  THE EXECUTIVE has another handful of blueberries in her hand and this time she shoves the whole lot into THE APPLICANT’s mouth.  THE EXECUTIVE then squeezes and rubs her body all over THE APPLICANT to the point where she’s practically riding the girl as she begins to grow once again.  

THE EXECUTIVE:  Oh, yes…  grow… grow for me.  Keep going.  Keep getting bigger.  Bigger, bigger, BIGGER!  I WANT YOUT TO BE THE BIGGEST JUICIEST BLUEBERRY IN THE WORLD!

THE APPLICANT moans with pleasure as grow she does.  As the suit reaches capacity, both women’s ecstasy comes to a climax.  THE APPLICANT’s body makes one last surge outward before… SPLOOSH!!!

We don’t see an explosion, but we cut to THE EXECUTIVE as she splashed with blueberry juice.  Holding a finger dripping with the blue liquid to her mouth, THE EXECUTIVE gives it a taste.

THE EXECUTIVE (smiling):  Wonderful.

THE EXECUTIVE slides the whole finger into her mouth and purrs with satisfaction.  As she pulls it out THE EXECUTIVE looks up with a smile as she gives an approving nod to THE APPLICANT who we see still very much alive only now she is fully deflated, no longer blue, and naked except for the enormous blue jacket that hangs from her shoulders (which should be large enough to show whatever amount of skin the actress is or isn’t comfortable showing.)

THE APPLICANT:  So… let’s talk benefits.

End.

Blimp Boy
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I really like this. Since I have several actresses, we could always do something like this if you want to. As an audio thing.

https://YouTube.com/sexyblimp

Check out our YouTube channel for Inflation Audio books and comic dubs.

clovis

This newer script was meant to be visual and I'm holding out hope that it may find its way to fruition. 

Seeing how the first script in this thread was a bit of a failure, I could modify it for your needs if you'd be interested.

The idea of an audio story is tempting.  I have an older idea that could work and I'll let you know if I can flesh it out.

Blimp Boy
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Yeah I was going to suggest modifying this story but it seems like a neat idea. Feel free to contact me.

https://YouTube.com/sexyblimp

Check out our YouTube channel for Inflation Audio books and comic dubs.