Part 1 of my first story ever [Blueberry]

Submitted by typewriter123 on Wed, 08/28/2019 - 19:10

Hi,

So I decided to give writing a shot. I know not everything will be 100% perfect but I'm really curious to hear some feedback!.

https://www.deviantart.com/thegr8inflator/art/Getting-The-Ball-Rollingpt1-FLpapo-Copy-811377221

Thanks! :)

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Thu, 08/29/2019 - 22:33

#2

typewriter123

Just released Part 2 if anyone's interested!

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Thu, 08/29/2019 - 22:34

#3

typewriter123

Just released Part 2 if anyone's interested!

http://fav.me/ddf5a67

Thu, 08/29/2019 - 22:34

#4

typewriter123

Just released Part 2 if anyone's interested!

http://fav.me/ddf5a67

Sat, 08/31/2019 - 20:26

#5

airtankgirl5

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Managed about three sentances. So many words so close together.