My video contribution to the community

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Tue, 12/24/2019 - 07:29

hose96

Hi guys,

It's been a while since I roam this forums just watching what happened and following some discussions, but never really got into the community.

Now I'm ready to present to you my contribution to this community in form of animations. Recently a user by the name of Imbapovi started making MMD animations that involved inflation, and he just kept getting better at it.
I wanted to do the same but let's just say that my creation doesn't reach his level of overall quality at all, but hey, it's the first attempt :)

This is the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLTMAhwpsHM

I'm open for suggestion and critiques on the overall product. And if you never did, go watch his videos: https://twitter.com/mmd_imbapovi if you are into this kind of animations, you will find the best on the market! ;)

Thank you for your attention,

Bye!

Wed, 12/25/2019 - 18:03

wespoooh3

nice

Fri, 12/27/2019 - 15:08

NameTaken

I would say it's a very solid start. A few observations and critiques, though:

- I think the biggest point to work on is her facial expressions. For a large portion of the video, her eyes stay completely still. Unblinking, not showing any emotion beyond a few winces near the end. This traps the character in an uncanny valley and breaks viewer immersion.

- As she gets bigger, the polygons on her model start to become visible. I'd say from about 0:50-1:00 is where it begins to get noticable, with it becoming more obvious from there. This is something I see in a lot of MMD animators. Imbapovi gets around this by actually swapping out the character's body parts after they get big enough. If I recall, he uses some of the balloons from here and reskins them to fit the character. If I were you, I'd go through some of his newer videos and try to spot where he decides to swap the parts out in each one.

- Lighting looks very nice. Orange sunlight and lots of heavy shadows makes me think this is taking place some time near sunset (assuming that's what you were going for).

- Some of the sound effects used could be changed or removed, namely the "boing" at 0:25 (too cartoony to be taken seriously for fetish purposes) and the belly gurgling noise beginning at 0:57 (a belly full of air likely wouldn't gurgle, that'd be more along the lines of water inflation or stuffing).

Do you have a Twitter, deviantArt, or Discord by chance? I'd definitely like to see where you go from here and how your future animations progress.

Sat, 12/28/2019 - 12:38

hose96

Hey! Thank you for looking at my video and actually think about some critiques! It's always good to get real thought feedback!

About the facial expressions yes, I couldn't figure out how to move the pupil movement on that model but I'm working on it for the next video.

Same as the second one, I was talking directly to him, and he was super nice to explain me some stuff, in fact, in the next video I'll be using textured balloons at a certain point. Textured by me, so not the best, but I'm learning a lot by doing this.

And sound effects, ye... I know that, I hate some decision I made about that, but I couldn't find a lot of free sounds, and the video felt "empty".

Yes, I have a page on Twitter, you can stay in touch through here: https://mobile.twitter.com/mmd_fun

I'll be happy to see more of your feedback on my next projects! :)

Fri, 01/24/2020 - 04:45

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doctorbo

It's super sweet, I like the use of the hose =, the prgrssion and just how big she gets!

Kudos to contributing back to the community - we have a niche interest and it's such project that keep it alive and floating (pun intended ;))

Visit the doctor's office: http://doctorbo.deviantart.com/

Wed, 03/03/2021 - 08:23

darkburster2

I thought it might’ve been you, there’s only 2 people that do mmd inflations, and impov is the other lol

Misery loves company.

Sun, 03/28/2021 - 15:19

footpumpgirl

Well I thought your work was very good. I'm sure as you do more you will hone your technique.

Bondage with Inflation.... what more could a girl ask for. If you wish to chat to me I am on xhamster. It is a free adult porn site and you will need a profile. Again this is free. Just let me know your from here and you wish to chat about inflating me

Mon, 03/29/2021 - 07:32

Pretsmann

The video has good quality

Mon, 04/19/2021 - 07:58

hose96

Hey there people, thanks for all the kind words!

I've been improving my skills and just today released a New clip.

It's on Twitter and Youtube https://twitter.com/MMD_Fun?s=09

I don't generally browse forums too much, so if you want to be updated on my stuff check out my Twitter which at the moment seems the safest place.

(recently youtube started banning this kind of content)

Thanks again, it's been nice to read this after a long time I didn't log in! :)

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