This would benefit from a spell check as well as more interesting word choices. The descriptions, particularly toward the end, could be a lot more creatively phrased.
Waterbelly
Alexis walked mindlessly through the school. She sighed "School sucks.." She moved her long brown hair around her ear so it wasn't in her face. Alexis kept walking mindlessly trying to get to her last class.
"Hey" Someone said. Alexis looked up.
"Oh hi!" Alexis said cheerfully.
"I'm Maxis" He reached out his hand for a handshake.
Alexis's mind was racing. She had never seen a guy so cute in her life!
"Hi Maxis" Alexis said. Staring up at Maxis's cute blue eyes.
"Call me Max." He tipped his head to the left a little, making his short blonde hair fall to the left. He then let his arm drop to his side.
Alexis smiled to make herself seem cute. She even twirled her long brown hair.
"Okay Maxis"
"Hey, watch out when you're wearing those button up shirts." Maxis said
Alexis was confused. Why did he say that? Alexis thought touching her button up shirt.
She smiled casually. "Okay.."
Max touched her belly lightly. "Watch out."
Alexis thought she was being seduced. She blushed and let him touch her belly a little longer.
Max continued to touch her belly. He started to rub it.
"Meet me behind the school, alright?" Max whispered in her ear. He kissed her lightly.
Alexis felt extremely horny. She watched as Max's hands were rubbing her belly.
"Yes Max..." She moaned.
Max looked at her and laughed. Alexis didn't know why, but she giggled a little.
"You're skinny..." Max said "Just right for me..." He smiled.
Max stopped rubbing her belly.
"Remember.." Were the last words he said before he walked off. He pointed to the classroom that Alexis asked when they stared the conversation. Alexis found the room and tried to finish the last bit of her last class
The school bell rang, and Alexis shot out of the school. Her butt was noticable though her booty shorts. But she didn't car. She continued to run to the back of the school.
She noticed Max standing against a wall. He looked up to see Alexis.
"I didn't know you would actually come." He smiled and stood up straight. He slowly walked to Alexis.
"What did you mean by 'Your skinny'?" Alexis asked
"You were too skinny." Max said, he reached out his hand and rubbed her belly.
Alexis blushed. She unbuttoned her shirt and pulled it up, so she could feel Max's warm hand. Her legs started to shake.
"W-why'd you want m-me here?" Alexis stuttered.
Max smiled. He stopped rubbing Alexis's belly.
"Could you come to my house?" Max asked.
Alexis quickly pulled her shirt down and buttoned it.
"Sure.." Alexis said, smiling.
Max started to walk toward a limousine. He stopped next to it and opened the door for Alexis. Alexis smiled and blushed. She ran toward Max and hopped in the limousine.
After a long relaxing ride, they finally made it to Max's house.
As soon as they walked into the house, Alexis was dazed on how big the house was. It was a mansion!
Max led her into his room. It was massive! Alexis was amazed. Max then led her into a room with water bottles everywhere. That room too, was massive!
Max handed her a weird looking pill. It was squishy and looked like water.
Alexis grabbed it and swallowed it. She suddenly felt really thirsty. Like she was in a desert for years without water. Her mouth was dry, Alexis swallowed her siliva, and it was like dust.
Max touched her belly again.
"Soon, you'll be big.." He said snickering. He walked out of the room.
Alexis grabbed a 20 gallon water bottle from the wall and started to chug down the whole thing. She looked down to see her belly getting bigger slowly. Same with her breasts and her butt.
Alexis groaned as her belly got bigger. She had the dry sensation again. But she couldn't help to rub her belly. Her shirt buttons were about to pop off.
She grabbed more water bottles and continue to chug water. Her belly bounced as she was chugging.
"My belly's getting bigger!" Alexis moaned.
Her shorts were super tight after 10 water bottles. Then, her shorts ripped from the sides, her shorts's button popped too. He groaned a sigh of relief. Glad that her short button popped off, she kept drinking more and more water.
She groaned when her shirt buttons was tight. She drank more and her buttons popped. They flew off. Her bra got super tight too. The wire's on the bra snapped and her bra came off. Her buttons near her breasts popped off and her nude breasts were showing.
She kept chugging water. Her thirst was suddenly satisfied.
She looked down and her breasts were huge and bouncy. Her butt was huge, and so was her belly.
Max walked into the room.
"Your beutiful" He smiled and as he rubbed Alexis's big, jiggly belly.
very nice. i will have to see if youve written more 8)