Tight Fit, A

Date Written: 
07/04/2014

1st of July, 2014


It was a cold winters day, Elisha, like many people, was staying inside, to escape the ferocious winds that constantly attacked the exterior of her house. Elisha is a young woman, who she believes, is absolutely beautiful, with golden blond hair and a very attractive figure. Elisha continued to ponder what to wear as she looked over her wardrobe, when suddenly, something astonishing caught her eye, she quickly grabbed it and layed her eyes apon a pink latex suit, it looked quite tight. Elisha chuckled decided that she would most definately wear this, it would give her something fun to do for a while, as she kept to herself inside her rather spacious house. The strange thing that went into Elisha's head was that she had never noticed this latex suit, nor recall buying such a thing, she looked over the tag, it carefully stated a set of instructions. 

"Blaire Industries

--- Please wash before use to recieve full effects of the suit ---

- Do not wear over extended amounts of time -"

Elisha had never heard of any company known as "Blare Industries" however, she was excited to try on the latex suit, she quickly noticed the zipper at the back of the suit, pulling it down and carefully slipping in the rather spacious suit. Elisha would quickly notice that this suit was somewhat baggy, it appeared that the suit was larger than she had previously expected, however this did not trouble her, and she quickly zipped up the suit. It only reached her neck, but all the same she was still happy, she quickly went down her hallway and entered her large living room. Elisha silently flopped down on the lounge, reaching for the television remote and turning the television on, she would scan the channels before slowly, but surely, falling asleep. As she was asleep, the latex suit would creak, and groan as it slowly shrinked to fit her rather inviting figure, hours later Elisha would wake up, first noticing quite clearly that the TV was still on, she would grab the remote and swiftly turn it off, before noticing the rather wild changes that the suit did to her over time, she would exclain rather loudly:

"HOLY CRAP!"

Before jumping out of her seat, she then would feel the snugness of the suit, she quickly dashed to a mirror to find out what exactly it had done. Looking into the mirror she could only state one thing, attractive, her frame had stuck to the latex like a second skin, Elisha would loudly chuckle, before continuing her ordinary day, after a quick lunch Elisha would notice something, the latex was getting...Much more tighter. It was strange to Elisha that this was happening, but decided that it had something to do with the cold. Elisha would then move towards the living room, before reaching a mirror, Elisha would notice herself, her eyes widening as she would see something absolutely amazing to her. Her bottom, once plump and firm had expanded to that of two huge globes that greedily expanded, Elisha would quickly grow amazed, she would suddenly state "Uh...Uhm...What if I take it off!?" before moving her hand to reach for the Zipper. Elisha would quickly discover that the Zipper had disappeared, and that she was trapped in the suit, the pink suit would continue to make her bottom grow larger, however something in her chest would begin to spark...

Elisha would suddenly reach out to touch her bottom, discovering that it is almost completely hollow, she would squeel with disbelief as her backside took in mass amounts of some form of gas. Elisha would then pay close attention to her chest, watching her breasts, once a meer size C, fill up to D in a matter of meer seconds. After this she would notice a force pulling herself upwards towards the roof, soon she would be hovering, Elisha would struggle to stay on the ground, however the forces inside her monstrous booty would pull upwards, wishing to be entirely free. Elisha's chest would be the size of two absolutely huge spheres, approximately a meter length each way, she would laugh hysterically believing largely that this was a dream, stating loudly "Hahah! Very funny...Now can I wake up?!" looking at her now enlarged assets as she finally reached the roof, her bottom recoiling several times on the roof before finally settling, much like a ballon. For a while, Elisha would be lost for words, unable to speak as she decifers this is not a dream, but actual life! She screams for help, noticing that she is slowly being pushed further towards the ground by her bottom, which relentlessly is growing larger and larger, meanwhile her breasts are attempting to compete with her rather enormous backside, which is growing more and more like a bubble. Elisha would feel the pressure against the latex suit and her skin, she would giggle, realising that there was no way she would get out of this situation. Pushing her hand against the hollow bubble that was her bottom, it would be entirely firm as Elisha would notice the smoothness that the latex had made. Elisha was soon overtaken with pleasure as the pressure went into her finest area, the latex pushing deep into the crack of her buttock, in order to make two seperate spheres, the latex would also push into her pussy, causing massive pleasure. Elisha was utterly delerious with pressure as she caught herself in the mirror, the latex had been growing to form with her, she was excited to see more changes, she squeeled "Ohhh..Y-Yes...Moorreee..." before it happened...The growing stopped, and Elisha was utterly surprised, she wished for more, she grew annoyed, however she noticed something that made her chuckle lightly...

She noticed her phone on a table near her lounge, she attempted to push herself off of the ceiling to grab it, with a short success she would quickly grab it, unlocking it. Elisha quickly opened an internet app, before typing in "Blarie Industries." she would come up with a link, clicking on it, it would come up with a large page, the title would state:

"Blaire Industries, pushing forward to new boundries!"

She would look over the page, before spotting the helpline, quickly moving to a calling app and jotting in the numbers...She would reach a computer, stating several things.

Attention, this is Blaire Industries, if you have had trouble with one of our products, press 1, if you have had trouble with packaging press 2, if you would like to make a recommendation to Blaire industries on one of our amazing products, press 3. Elisha would quickly press one, before a voice stated to her:

"Hello this is Blaire Industries, could you please state the product and your problem with said product."

"Uh...Well...I-It's not so much a problem...But...T-The product is a pink latex suit...And it uhh...Has had some...Amazing changes..."

"How long have you had the pink latex suit on?"

"Uh...A couple hours...It's been...Uh...Pretty fun..."

"Oh dear...Please state your location Ma'am...And we'll dispatch someone right away to deal with your problem."

"Uh...10...Green Lane...Oakwood City...P-Please Hurry...It's getting...Alot...Oooh...Sn-Snugger...."

To be Continued.

Author's Note: 

One of my very first inflation stories, hope you enjoy it guys, I'll try and make a new one very soon!

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Average: 3.2 (9 votes)
blackfedora
Verb tense adds a degree of awkward.

I don't know if you were trying something new or not with the verb tense, but it comes off as a bit awkward using a passive tense.

Basically removing the woulds makes the story read far more dynamic.

Example: Elisha suddenly reached out to touch her bottom, discovering that it was almost completely hollow, she squealed with disbelief as her backside took in massive amounts of some form of gas. Elisha then paid close attention to her chest, watching her breasts, once a mere size C, fill up to D in a matter of seconds.

Most common tense for story-writing really is third person past tense. It's not fancy, but its easy to write and read.

Otherwise I like the general concept and feel.

airtankgirl5
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Not too bad, needs polish.

Blackfedora is right, your tense is wonky.

Next, spellcheck.  It's easy.  The computer does it for you.  Writing "meer" rather than "mere" is just lazy.

Then, paragraphs.  Learn them, love them, use them.

To expect people to take the time to read, the readers expect you to take the time to write.

HeavyMetalRox
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It could use a little

It could use a little editing. I detect a combination of past tense and future tense, and that wouldn't work. I also saw a few grammatical errors but other than that, great story!

-Joe