Nina walked up the stairs to her bedroom after a long day of school. She was absolutely miserable. She had barely slept a wink the previous night, she had gym class today, she had a metric shit-ton of homework to do, and her boyfriend of two years broke up with her to date some big-titted skank. She needed that like she needed a bullet to the head. She tore into her room and threw her bag onto the floor; she wasn’t even gonna do that homework tonight, she’s too tired. She just wanted to take a nap and forget about her boyfriend being a prick.
She was about to get up in bed when she noticed a box with a note on it sitting on her night stand. She picked it up and read the note:
“Nina, I noticed you weren’t sleeping so well, so I got you this air freshener. It’s lavender-scented, which I hear is supposed to help you sleep. Let me know if it works.
-Mom”
Nina took the note off of the box, which immediately captured her attention. The box said that it was a “Lavender-Scented Apples to Melons Air Freshener” and under it, said “By Betty Balloon”.
“Betty Balloon? What kind of a name is that?”
She turned the box around and found out, probably, why her name is “Betty Balloon”. On the back of the box, there was a picture of a brunette woman giving a radiant smile with gigantic breasts. They were crammed into a tight red sweater and had to be twice the size of her head AT LEAST. Nina wondered why a woman who looks like she could make it big in the porn industry is selling air fresheners.
“If it helps me sleep, I don’t care what this chick’s selling or how big her boobs are.”
She took the air freshener out of the box, set it down and twisted the top of it open. Immediately the room filled up with the lavender scent. Nina lied down on the bed, noting that her mother was right; the scent of lavender was making her fall asleep, making her drift off little by little. She started to notice a tightness in her chest, but fell asleep completely before she could think too much about it.
She woke up hours later feeling much better. She slowly lifted her eyelids, only to have her vision obscured by a pair of big orbs that appeared to be under her shirt. She realized exactly what those orbs were and sat up fast, shocked by what had happened to her. She held her new massive breasts in her hands and felt them slowly increasing in size. She gave each breast a little squeeze and noticed that what they were filling up with was air. It was then she knew EXACTLY why that woman’s name was “Betty Balloon”, she had gotten that way by INFLATING herself! That’s why it was called an “Apples to Melons Air Freshener”, it blew up your boobs from “Apples” to “Melons”! Hers were the size of melons already but were still growing.
Freaking out, Nina reached over to close the air freshener, but knocked it to the floor by accident. She took off her shirt and pulled her breasts apart to better look at the floor, but didn’t see it.
“Shit! It went under the bed!”
She got up off the bed and got down onto the floor. While reaching for the air freshener, the nipples on her swelling breasts brushed up against the carpet. Nina collapsed onto the floor from the unexpected wave of pleasure. Forgetting what she was doing, Nina rolled over onto her back and pinched her left nipple. She bit her lip, it felt so good. While still pinching her nipple, Nina’s other hand made its way to her pussy. She could feel her breasts getting slightly bigger with each heart beat as she rubbed her clitoris. Moaning in pleasure, she came all over the carpet. She stopped masturbating when she felt a familiar tightness in her stomach.
She sat up, rubbing her belly as it too filled up with air. It was growing fast as if trying to catch up with her breasts.
“Ohh”
Blowing up like a balloon felt so good. Almost as soon as her belly started to fill, she felt an all-too-familiar tightness in her butt cheeks. With one hand still rubbing her belly, the other hand reached down to rub her right buttock. Nina felt so good, her breasts were bigger than Betty Balloon’s, her belly looked like she was pregnant with two full-grown humans, and her butt was tearing her jeans apart. She wished that she had more arms so she can rub them all.
“Ow…”
Nina’s pleasure turned to pain as her skin began to creak.
“Owwww…”
In her ecstasy, Nina had nearly forgotten why she was blowing up in the first place. It took her a moment to remember that she has to close the air freshener that’s now under her bed. She turned around and looked at her bed, then examined her newly inflated figure. It was definitely going to get in the way, and she was still growing. She looked over to her closed bedroom door. There was no way she was going to fit through there.
“I have to try-ohhh…”
She could feel it, her time was almost up. The creaking in her skin got louder as she reached toward under the bed. The pain was getting more and more excruciating by the millisecond.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!”
*POP!*
Nina burst apart. Blood painted the walls and bits of her went everywhere. Moments later, Nina’s mother got home from work. She walked indoors, took off her shoes and walked into the kitchen to start dinner.
“Nina! I’m home!”
She got no response.
“Must be napping.”
She walked up the stairs, slowly and quietly, to check on her daughter. She turned the knob on Nina’s bedroom door and slowly opened it.
“Nina, are you aslee-AHHHHH!”
She saw the horrific scene in Nina’s room. Pieces of her daughter were everywhere, everything was covered in blood, there was what appeared to be a large cum stain on the carpet. She picked up Nina’s disembodied head from the corner of the room. Crying, she held it to her chest.
“What happened to you?” she said through tears.
Confusion was piled on top of her fear and depression when she noticed that her breasts were growing.
Great story was to the point pretty much and I liked it. The idea was also good.
Great grammer and puncation
However as the subject says the gruesome end to poor Nina threw me somewhat, Personally Im not a huge fan of popping but I dont mind it if done with little gore. The 'Disembodied head' part was a little too much for me how each to his own its your story, if you like that you roll with it.
Other than that Id say great first job hope to see more stories in the future
Regards
V
No, disembodied heads aren't actually my thing. I've heard writers say that when you write a story, you eventually stop telling the story what to do and it starts telling you what to write. I didn't expect that that would happen on one of my first ones though. After writing, I actually did wonder if I was going too far, but somehow, don't ask, I felt like the story needed it. I guess I kinda wanted to disturb the audience so you would know just what Nina's mom felt? I dunno. Bottom line is that I agree with you and next time I'm going to show some restraint.
I say props for pushing the envelope a little bit. This is a largely unexplored area of inflation fiction, so you get bonus points for writing something that not many people do.
That said, I would have preferred a longer and more detailed inflation scene.
Thank you. I'll keep that in mind next time.
Please tag the popping. It's a subject that often divides the community, but tagging helps offset it. As far as the story goes, you did an excellent job with the inflation bit. Would like a bit more detail. Also, good attempt at hiding the second familiar in the butt/belly part. Most folks don't even try to hide repeated words. It stuck out to me, but I'm very picky. Well above average, please tag popping, 8/10.
I didn't even consider that tagging the popping would be necessary. If you hover over the word "Popping:" at the top, it tells you if it has popping and what kind. I'll make sure to tag the popping next time.
Poor nina! She didnt deserve to pop like that, i know that some people are ok with popping, but i mean, "disembodied head" just....it turned me off instantly...
I'm sorry you felt that way. Next time I'm going to show some restraint and might not even use gore at all. I will explain though that the disembodied head wasn't supposed to be sexy. For some reason, I just felt like the story needed it; it needed to be somewhat disturbing. If I ever do something like this again, I'll probably have it tagged as "Erotic Horror".
And you are right! There are only few stories that involve messy gory pop! We need more of those. Don't listen to people who say that it's bad because popping is not their thing. THey shouldn't have clicked on it in the first place since it has "messy" popping tag! Story is amazing and gore actually makes it way more better!
There are many fetishes and difrent people like difrent things. You can't please everyone. You are doing amazing with gore and, I think, should keep up along this way!
Great job!
i sometimes read a lot of inflations stories and i tend to enjoy popping ones mainly because i find non-popping a little to predictable but that's just me, when i read the head part i was like "Well that's something you don't really see" so nice job
Nina wakes up ..... it was all a dream.
for some strange reason, this story reminds me of a lass by the name of rosy, what with the depressed mood in the begining. Also, ye did a good job on the story, matey! I did think the popping was a *tad* bit to much, then again, i've seen that fazbear twerk...my eyes bled that day
for some strange reason, this story reminds me of a lass by the name of rosy, what with the depressed mood in the begining. Also, ye did a good job on the story, matey! I did think the popping was a *tad* bit to much, then again, i've seen that fazbear twerk...my eyes bled that day
That ending with the mother is gonna haunt me for a long time. I rarely see a burst played for actual drama.
Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
Somewhere in between. It was a well-written story, I'll say. Just not quite my cup of tea. But hey, when an inflation story can make me feel something other than arousal, you're doing something right.
Somewhere in between. It was a well-written story, I'll say. Just not quite my cup of tea. But hey, when an inflation story can make me feel something other than arousal, you're doing something right.
I'm really glad to hear that. I want to write for a living one day, so you can guess that it makes me happy to see that I can make something more than just what it is.
I love stories like this one. The blood on the walls, the head, it made me cum for a good whole minute which is hard to do. You made me want to be Nina. You made me wish I was her.
Burst rate with this one is probably close to 100% ^_^
Kidding!
Extremely hot! Congrats
edit:
Three things are my favourite -
1. She takes off the shirt and moves breasts apart to looks between them - it really showed me that she's a lady and wears them all the time. I've seen so many stories where a lady is not sure what to do with her own front
2. The story doesn't end when the text is over. And here's another one! Loved that!
3. That head in the corner ^_^ a very strong image of a mother and child - something worth pages of context. It really felt right - to show the finality of it. And the fact that it's a kill is worth several more pages of context - for example, who are these people and why order their assasination. Many people are against seeing a pop as death - many are for it (including me).
Anyhow, it would be very interesting what do you think on recently discussed Permanency of the pop and it's Scenarios.