Remember me? I'm the weird girl who posts about Transformers. Oh God, I'm so nervous tpying this. I noticed that you people like to write stories, and I wanted to join in. I had a lot of fun writing this story, and I want to write more. I tried to submit the story to the library on this site, but it'll probably not be accepted, since it has a robot. The story does have an hourglass expansion because her breasts does become bigger and not because she's getting taller, they become bigger in general, and her butt curves as well. It mentions sex and gentials. I would like a critique, whether you like it or not, or a psycho analysis of my story, if you please can. I even drew art of it.
I would like to write another story, and it doesn't have Transformers and features male weight gain. I also think that the library won't accept it because I guess they're funny about weight gain. I think weight gain should be part of body expansion. I thought someone who would like this story idea and it's a bunch women fatting up a guy with him as the main character.
Below is the link to my deviantart account:
https://www.deviantart.com/shannonmechas/art/Riding-Metroplex-A-Giantess-Story-Warning-Mature-1034489586
Thank-you very much for reading my story!! :)
I make a mistake with the asking for critique. What I meant about whether you like it or not is not me forcing you to critique it. I meant for was to ask how you like the story, whether it's good or bad. Sorry for the confusion.