Second attempt at the style I'm currently working with. Thought I'd share with you all for opinions.
It was a day just like any other day. A high school girl named Amber was walking down the street towards the shopping mall. As she walked, she twittered her friends on her cell phone.
Jerri just got force-fed a bunch of rice and hot water. It ends pretty messy, but I left out that part.
This one's right before she explodes...
